對于初中生進行英語作文教學:首先,要教授基本功“各種語句的表達”;接著,還要教授句子的變化方式;即,一句多種表達。再者是:寫作的格式,框架;其次,進行講授作文的特征:層次性,順序性,變化性;最后,講授作文的寫作構成,即成文。
一,各種句型的講授:
1.判斷句型:My nose is small.
2.描述句型:I have a small nose.
3.陳述句型:I come from England.
4.連詞的應用:We are in the same school, but in different grades.
5.表達情感的句型: I am very glad to be here.
這是基本功,學好了,寫作才可以得心應手;可以表達自己的真實想法,表達真感情。
二,教授一意多句的形式(句子的變化):
比如:My nose is small.可以變化為,I have a small nose.
同樣,I am Chinese.可以變化為,I come from China.
還有,We look the same.可以變化為I look like him/her.
變化來自生活,生活是豐富多彩的,語言要表達生活就要變化,這樣寫出的文章才有生機,豐富多樣。
三,寫作的格式,框架:
1,自我介紹的寫作:I am a boy. I am thirteen years old. I come from China.I am a student.(寫性別,年齡,國籍,職業)
2,外貌描寫:I have a round face and small eyes. My nose is dig. My mouth is wide.(對五官的特征進行描述/陳述,由上到下的順序)
3,整體加特色的外貌描寫:She is tall like you, but she doesn't have long hair. It's short and brown.(由遠到近的順序進行描寫)
4,衣著加外貌的描寫:Look at this photo. This girl in yellow is Maria. She is tall. She has short brown hair.(有亮點到特色)
5,過渡句,總結句:I have a sister. (Her name is ....) . We look the same , but we are in different clothes.(對下邊的書寫引好鋪墊)
We don't have the same looks, but we're good friends. (呼應上文,前后統一)
四,層次性,順序性,變化性是作文的特征:
比如:I'm Kangkang. I have a new classmate. He is from Japan.
We both have black hair and black eyes. We look the same, but we are in different clothes.
He is in a purple T—shirt and my T—shirt is red. His pants are blue and mine are white. My shoes are blue and his are black.
五,作文的寫作構成,就是幾種寫作方式的組合:
比如,要寫一個人可以這樣寫:介紹寫作模式+過渡句+興趣寫作模式+總結句。
范文: My new classmate
Jane is my good friend. She comes from Canada. She speaks English.
We are in the same class.
Many students in our class like English a lot, but I don't like it at all. My English is poor, so Jane often helps me with it. And I help her study Chinese. We help each other.
體會:這樣的寫作教學法可以讓學生寫作靈活多樣,運用自如,可以適應出題的變化;是真正教會學生寫作。