高考作文中中等生面臨的困境及突破方法

作文是英語高考的重頭戲，也是拉開中等生和優等生的一個主要部分。如何提高英語寫作水平是中等生所面臨的一個重要問題。

中等生在寫作中存在的主要問題有:

遺漏要點;審題不嚴;語言基本功不好(遣詞能力不強，經常出現句子結構錯誤)等。

就上面的問題我提出如下的解決方案:

一、認真審題，理解題意

首先要看準文章的寫作體裁，其次才能定時態、人稱、格式，然后再考慮語言、語氣的運用。

要仔細審題，把握所有的寫作要點。

二、提高遣詞的能力

平時學習過程中注意總結各種各樣的詞匯，加強同義和反義聯想，如:

表達愛憎感情的詞語:be into，be for， be interested in， hate， dislike， be tired of， excited， pleased， satisfied， angry， sad， worried， terrified...

描述人物性格、外貌和身體狀況等的詞語: goodlooking，blueeyed，warmhearted， farsighted，stupid，silly，clever，wise，bright，diligent，lazy...

三、掌握英語基本句型

There be 句型:There are different opinions among people as to using private cars.

定語從句:Man is now facing a big problem of air pollution which is becoming more and more serious.

名詞性從句 :I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us.

倒裝:Only in these ways can we control the air pollution.

主語+系動詞+so+形容詞+that從句:He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed.

主語+謂語+間接賓語+直接賓語:He paid me a visit yesterday.

四、練習合并句子

例如:It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. →Early in the morning， Mr. Smith was watering flowers in his garden.

五、改寫句子

例如:將句子Mr. Green is a tall man， who wears a pair of thick glasses. 改成用介詞短語作伴隨狀語→Mr. Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses.

還可用一句多譯的方式練習:這本書花了我10元。I paid 10 yuan for the book. It cost me 10 yuan to buy the book.

六、呈現閃光點

學習一些閃光點例子:

使用非謂語動詞(短語):

While climbing the mountain， we enjoy the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.

恰當的承接語、插入語、省略及替代 :

Besides， it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs， because by doing so you will learn and remember Chinese words more easily.

it句型及從句:

When it comes to destressing， it helps to set aside some time for yourself once a week.

總之，要掌握寫作的基本方法，基本句型一定要掌握，并且要勤練習，每周都要有書面表達的練習，這樣中等生是可以提高寫作水平的。

(責任編輯 周侯辰)