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張　婷

學生習作(張婷 湖北省)：

Sunny Saturday 2007, Oct. 3rd1

It is2 sunny and hot. I went to a beautiful place—Great Wall3 with my friends. We went there at 10:00 by a bus4. We had great fun playing on it. In the afternoon we comed5 back with happy heart(心情).

分析：本篇是以日記的形式記錄了有趣的假期，語言簡潔，條理清晰，值得學習，但仍有幾處錯誤，請注意：

1. 英語日記中日期和天氣情況的位置和漢語不同。英語一般在左邊寫月，日，年和星期，用形容詞把天氣情況寫在右邊。

2. 英語中通常是記敘當天發生過的事情，因此所用的時態一般是過去時。

3. “長城”為專有名詞，在表達時前面要加the。

4. by+交通工具，其中交通工具前不加冠詞。

5. 此處錯誤在于come的過去式沒有掌握。come屬于不規則變化，其過去式是 came。

Oct. 3rd, 2007, Saturday Sunny

It was sunny and hot, I went to a beautiful place—the Great Wall with my friends. We went there at 10:00 by bus. We had great fun playing on it. In the afternoon we came back with happy heart.

（指導老師：許淑芬）