2019年考研英語(yǔ)（一）作文試題評(píng)析

賈從永

Directions：

Suppose you are working for the “Aiding Rural Primary School” project of your university， write a letter to answer the inquiry from an international student volunteer. You need to specify the details of the project.

You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

2019年考研英語(yǔ)（一）的小作文假設(shè)你為你們大學(xué)的“幫助農(nóng)村小學(xué)”項(xiàng)目工作，要求你給一位外國(guó)留學(xué)生志愿者寫(xiě)一封回信，向其介紹該項(xiàng)目的情況。書(shū)信體的英語(yǔ)作文一般從稱呼開(kāi)始寫(xiě)起，由于對(duì)方是一位素未謀面的留學(xué)生志愿者，所以稱呼宜莊重正式。我們假設(shè)她名叫Sara Smith，則稱呼可寫(xiě)Dear Ms Sara Smith。稱呼要頂格寫(xiě)，后面用逗號(hào)。

這封書(shū)信的正文宜寫(xiě)三個(gè)段落。第一段表明寫(xiě)這封信的目的——告知信息。由于這是一封回信，我們不妨先提一下對(duì)方曾來(lái)信咨詢“幫助鄉(xiāng)村小學(xué)”項(xiàng)目的情況，然后表明這封書(shū)信就是要告訴她關(guān)于該項(xiàng)目的信息。第二段向Sara Smith具體介紹這一項(xiàng)目的信息。至于介紹哪些信息，考生可以自由發(fā)揮，只要與這個(gè)項(xiàng)目有關(guān)就行。比如，我們可以從兩個(gè)方面介紹這個(gè)項(xiàng)目：首先介紹這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的目的——幫助中國(guó)西部農(nóng)村的孩子學(xué)習(xí);然后介紹這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的內(nèi)容 ——組織和培訓(xùn)志愿者在暑假期間到西部農(nóng)村小學(xué)任教。既然這位留學(xué)生志愿者來(lái)信咨詢這個(gè)項(xiàng)目，她可能有意要做這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的志愿者，所以我們可以歡迎她來(lái)做英語(yǔ)老師。第三段先告訴她如果想了解進(jìn)一步的信息，可以訪問(wèn)這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的網(wǎng)站，然后表明自己期待著她能加入志愿者的隊(duì)伍。郵件的最后是署名，寫(xiě)在正文下方中間偏右的位置，上一行可寫(xiě)Yours sincerely，下一行寫(xiě)Li Ming，上下對(duì)齊。下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

Dear Ms Sara Smith，

I am writing to you in reference to your letter of December 2nd. You asked about the “Aiding Rural Primary School” project of our university. Here is some information about the project.

The aim of the project is to help rural children in their studies. It organizes and trains volunteers who are to teach in rural primary schools in western China during summer vocations. If you can work for the project this summer， you are most welcome， for we are in bad need of qualified English teachers.

For further information， please visit our website at www.arps.com. We are looking forward to your joining us.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming （112 words）

Directions：

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture. In your essay， you should

1） describe the picture briefly;

2） interpret its intended meaning， and

3） give your comments.

2019年考研英語(yǔ)（一）的大作文屬于哲理型漫畫(huà)作文，即漫畫(huà)反映的是一種人生哲理。人生哲理一般充滿正能量，對(duì)年輕人富有教育意義，如堅(jiān)韌、毅力、自信、樂(lè)觀、善良、勤奮、合作、團(tuán)結(jié)等。我們要寫(xiě)好這種類型的漫畫(huà)作文，首先要仔細(xì)觀察漫畫(huà)，準(zhǔn)確理解漫畫(huà)的寓意。在本題的漫畫(huà)中，我們可以看到兩個(gè)登山者爬到了半山腰，其中一個(gè)癱坐在臺(tái)階上說(shuō)：“累了，爬不動(dòng)了?！倍耐檫f給他一瓶水，勸他休息一下再接著爬。結(jié)合漫畫(huà)下方的標(biāo)題“途中”，我們可以看出這幅漫畫(huà)的寓意是：毅力對(duì)于成功非常重要。

我們可以把這篇作文寫(xiě)成三個(gè)段落。引言段描述這幅漫畫(huà)，由于這是一篇論說(shuō)文，描述漫畫(huà)是手段而不是目的，所以我們描述漫畫(huà)宜簡(jiǎn)筆勾勒，勿工筆細(xì)描，一般兩三句話足矣。主體段先指出這幅漫畫(huà)的寓意——毅力對(duì)于成功的重要性。然后論述為什么毅力對(duì)于成功非常重要。我們要論述一個(gè)抽象的道理，最好能舉出具體的例子，即所謂的虛題實(shí)寫(xiě)。例子不拘一格，可舉名人或偉人的事跡做例子，也可舉凡人小事做例子，還可以引用研究結(jié)果、調(diào)查統(tǒng)計(jì)等，只要能證明這個(gè)道理都可入例。比如，本文要證明毅力對(duì)于成功的重要性，我們就可以先引用前人的研究結(jié)果做例證，指出成功者都是那些屢次失敗又屢次嘗試的人，而那些輕易放棄的人卻從來(lái)成不了大事。接著，我們可以以發(fā)明了電燈泡的美國(guó)發(fā)明家托馬斯·愛(ài)迪生為例：如果他第一次失敗就放棄了，也許就沒(méi)有這個(gè)奇妙的發(fā)明了。

本文可以用建議法結(jié)尾，即建議讀者踐行漫畫(huà)中所蘊(yùn)含的道理。我們可以先重述主題——做任何事情都會(huì)有挑戰(zhàn)，而毅力是戰(zhàn)勝挑戰(zhàn)的關(guān)鍵。接著建議讀者在想放棄的時(shí)候堅(jiān)持不懈，因?yàn)橹挥挟?dāng)你放棄，你才會(huì)失敗。下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

The drawing above shows two men climbing a hill. One of the climbers got so tired that he collapsed on a step， ready to give up. His companion， however， is handing him a bottle of water and encouraging him to go on climbing.

Obviously， the picture is aimed at emphasizing the importance of perseverance， a character trait that separates achievers from the rest of the pack. As we know， life is rarely plain sailing. To succeed you have to persevere through daunting obstacles. Studies have shown that highly successful people are those who have failed many times but who have tried again and again and again. Those who quit easily， however， never amount to anything great. If Thomas Edison， the American inventor who invented the electric light bulb， had given up the first time he failed， this marvelous invention might not have been possible as early as 1879.

Like mountain-climbing， every worthwhile endeavor comes with challenges， some of them seemingly insurmountable. The key to overcoming the challenges is dogged perseverance. So press ahead next time you feel like quitting. You will never fail unless you give up. （187 words）

語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. The drawing above shows two men climbing a hill. 這幅畫(huà)顯示兩個(gè)男子在爬山。show sb doing sth顯示某人正在做某事。

2. One of the climbers got so tired that he collapsed on a step， ready to give up.一個(gè)登山者累得坐在臺(tái)階上，準(zhǔn)備放棄。collapse（因精疲力竭而）突然坐下。

3. Obviously， the picture is aimed at emphasizing the importance of perseverance， a character trait that separates achievers from the rest of the pack.顯然，這幅畫(huà)的目的是強(qiáng)調(diào)毅力的重要性，毅力是一種把成功者與其他人區(qū)別開(kāi)來(lái)的性格特點(diǎn)。separate區(qū)分，區(qū)別。achiever成功者。the rest of the pack其余的人。

4. As we know， life is rarely plain sailing.我們知道，人生很少一帆風(fēng)順。plain / smooth sailing一帆風(fēng)順。

5. To succeed you have to persevere through daunting obstacles.為了獲得成功，你必須堅(jiān)持不懈才能越過(guò)令人生畏的障礙。daunting令人生畏的。

6. Those who quit easily， however， never amount to anything great.而那些輕易放棄的人卻永遠(yuǎn)成不了大事。not amount to anything不會(huì)有出息。

7. Like mountain-climbing， every worthwhile endeavor comes with challenges， some of them seemingly insurmountable.就像爬山一樣，任何有意義的嘗試都會(huì)有挑戰(zhàn)，有些挑戰(zhàn)還似乎難以戰(zhàn)勝。endeavor（尤指新的或創(chuàng)造性的）努力，嘗試。come with有。seemingly看似。

8. The key to overcoming the challenges is dogged perseverance.戰(zhàn)勝挑戰(zhàn)的關(guān)鍵是頑強(qiáng)的毅力。dogged頑強(qiáng)的。

9. So press ahead next time you feel like quitting.所以下次當(dāng)你感覺(jué)想放棄時(shí)，堅(jiān)持下去。press ahead（不顧困難地）繼續(xù)干下去。next time下一次，用來(lái)引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，相當(dāng)于一個(gè)連詞。