高考英語全國卷中留言條寫作導(dǎo)練

張路寧

一、文體概述

留言條開篇須有稱呼語，日期部分可寫在右上角，結(jié)尾須署姓名在正文的右下角；留言條（也可稱為便條）雖簡單，但中心務(wù)必突出，講清楚寫給誰、什么事、誰寫以及寫于什么時候。注意以第一或第三人稱的形式給第二人稱寫留言條。

二、常用短語

1. wont be back until 5：00 p.m. 直到下午5點才回來

2. return the book to the library把書還給圖書館

3. meet at Coffee Room在咖啡屋見面

4. have something important to do有重要的事情要做

5. feel very sorry about ...對……感到抱歉

6. inform him of this change告知他這個變化

7. leave ... for ... 離開……去……

8. so that ... 以便……

9. be out shopping外出購物

10. be ill in bed臥病在床

三、套用句式

1. It was thoughtful /considerable of you ... 你很體貼……

2. We are delighted to receive ... 我們很高興能收到……

3. Thank you so much for ... 非常感謝你的……

4. We are going to ... 我們將要做……

5. Lets set some other time for the meeting. 讓我們另約見面時間。

四、習(xí)作修改 下列習(xí)作中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

March 21

Mrs. Wilson，

I am going out shop， and wont be back at about 5：00 p.m. I have taken with me the two book you asked me to return back to the City Library.

In about one oclock this afternoon， Tracy called， said that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend. She felt very sorry about that， and said that you could set some other time for meeting. She wants you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan for this change.

Yours

Li Hua

五、課堂練習(xí)

假定你是李華，本已約好與Kelvin今天（4月8日）晚上一起看電影《捉妖記》（Monster Hunt）。但你臨時有事找他未果，他打籃球未回，故給他寫留言條。要點如下：

1. 臨時有事要做。

2. 具體更改的見面時間、地點。

3. 此事已告知誰。

4. 見字告知。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

April 8

Hi Kelvin，

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Yours，

Li Hua

六、課外作業(yè)

假定你是李華，你到一個叫Alex的同學(xué)家，叫他幫忙做一件事，碰巧他不在家。因此，你給他寫了一張留言條，要點如下：

1. 請他代你參加明天（3月12日）的植樹活動。

2. 集合地點，如何出發(fā)。

3. 天氣情況。

4. 自備的東西。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

March 11

Dear Alex，

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Yours，

Li Hua

參考答案

習(xí)作修改

本文是李華告知Mrs. Wilson，Tracy明天早上不能如時赴約，請Mrs. Wilson回家后盡快回復(fù)Tracy。

1. shop →shopping 因go shopping為固定搭配，表示“去購物”。

2. at →until/till 因not ... until/till（直到……才）是固定搭配。

3. book →books 因為是兩本書，book可數(shù)，應(yīng)該用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。

4. 去掉return后的back因return=give back，不再用back。

5. In →At 具體時間點，用介詞at。

6. said →saying 動作是主語Tracy發(fā)出，用現(xiàn)在分詞充當伴隨狀語。

7. and →but 她說她感到抱歉，但是可以再約時間，表轉(zhuǎn)折，用but。

8. 在meeting前加the 因為明天的見面在上文已提及，第二次出現(xiàn)需要加定冠詞the。

9. wants→wanted因事情發(fā)生在過去，謂語動詞用過去式。

10. for →about 告訴某人某事，搭配為tell sb. about sth。

課堂練習(xí)

April 8

Hi Kelvin，

I am sorry to tell you that as I have something important to attend this evening， I cant go to see the movie， Monster Hunt， with you this evening. Would you mind my changing our appointment to tomorrow and another place， the Wanda Cinema？ We will meet together at 7：00 p.m. at the gate of the cinema tomorrow evening. I have already told your parents about this change when you were out to play basketball. If this change is not convenient to you， you can inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.

Yours，

Li Hua

課外作業(yè)

March 11

Dear Alex，

I would like to ask you for help. Would you please take the place of me to take part in the tree planting activity in the Peoples Park tomorrow？ You know the school sports meeting has taken up much of my time and energy， and I need to adjust myself. You will get together at the school gate at 7 oclock， and set off by bike for the park. By the way， it is reported that it probably rains tomorrow， so do remember to take your raincoat along with you. Besides， you must bring your own lunch. A million thanks to you！

Yours，

Li Hua

責任編輯 蔣小青