高考英語全國卷中慰問信寫作導練

張路寧

一、文體概述

慰問信是指在同學、親友考試失利、生病、受傷或遇到火災、水災、被盜等不幸事件時，對對方表示慰問的信件。慰問信要寫得真誠并注意措辭；要圍繞一個中心，關心鼓勵對方，主動提供幫助并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。內容常包括：對不幸事件表示關心同情→安慰和提供幫助→鼓勵其努力→再次表示同情并希望其早日復原或者走出困境。

二、必備短語

1. have/show sympathy for... 對……表示同情

2. be filled with ... 充滿了……

3. convey my sympathy to ... 轉達我對……的同情

4. Best wishes for ... 最好的祝愿……

5. We are all hoping ... 我們都希望……

6. get through the difficulty渡過難關

7. make a full recovery取得完全康復

8. leave the hospital / be discharged from the hospital出院

9. I couldnt believe that ... 我無法相信……

三、套用句式

1. I am so sorry/shocked to learn of the news that ... 很抱歉/震驚得知……

2. I am deeply sorry to hear that... / I just cant tell you how sorry I am to hear that... 聽到……我深感難過。

3. Please accept my deepest sympathy請接受我最深切的慰問

4. I would like to send you my best wishes for ... 我想送你我最美好的祝愿。

5. I wish you swift/quick/speedy recovery祝愿你快速康復。

四、習作修改 下列習作中共有10處錯誤，每句最多兩處，請改正。

Dear John，

I am shocking to hear that you have bad cold and now are in hospital. I get this news from your mother and know you must be absent for half a month at the classes. Do are careful while you are ill. Dont worry about your lesson and I am willing to help you learn from them when you return.

We are best friends so I will never allow you to fall behind. You can watch television or listen with radio programs to help pass the time but forget your pains while you recover. I did hope that I can see you soon and bring you any funny cartoons.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

五、課堂練習

假定你是李華，在美國某學校學習，你的同學Mike的家突然遭受火災，所有財產毀于一旦，你作為班長給處于極度悲傷和自救的他寫一封慰問信，要點如下：

1. 對該同學表示關心。

2. 向其提供一些幫助，如捐助和補習。

3. 表達希望和對其重建家園的信心。

注意：1. 詞數100以上；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。

Dear Mike，

I was so sorry to hear of the sudden fire that destroyed your beautiful house， and your house is in ruins.

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

六、課外作業

假定你是李芳，你的美國好友Jane數學學得不好，對自己失去了信心，產生了厭學情緒。請你給她發一封電子郵件開導她。要點如下：

1. 沒有必要過于傷心；

2. 要振作起來，盡量減少焦慮心理；

3. 和老師交流有助于你改善；

4. 探索適合自己的有效學習方式。

注意：l. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jane，

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_____________________________________________________Yours，

Li Fang

參考答案與范文

習作修改

本文是李華得知同學大傷風而住院后，寫信慰問同學。

1. shocking →shocked 表達“對……感到震驚”，人的內心感受，用動詞的過去分詞。

2. 在bad cold前加a 因cold意為“感冒”時為可數名詞。

3. at→from 因固定搭配be absent from表示缺席。

4. are→be 因是祈使句，且在助動詞do之后，用動詞原形。

5. lesson→lessons 因lesson作為課時講時，可數，因為生病缺勤的話，不止落下一節課，所以用復數形式。

6. 去掉them前面的from 因意指“我樂意幫助你學習（功課）”，直接用learn sth。

7. with→to 聽收音機，listen to是固定搭配。

8. but→and 因消磨時間和忘記傷痛是并列關系，用and連接。

9. did→do 這一段講的是作者此刻的想法，表示強調用助動詞do。

10. any→some 肯定句中，為別人帶來一些東西，一般用some。

課堂練習

Dear Mike，

I was so sorry to hear of the sudden fire that destroyed your beautiful house， and your house is in ruins. Were filled with deep sorrow. Please convey our sympathy to your family. Thinking about your present situation， we cannot wait a minute to make efforts to help you. I， as a monitor， on behalf of our class， express our most sincere pity and care for you. A house can be destroyed， but not hopes.

Besides， we make a donation of some money， expecting that it can help you get through the difficulty. We believe that with the help of so many kind people， a better house can be rebuilt.

Finally， were all hoping youll be back to school soon and we will make up the lessons for you.

Best wishes！

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

課外作業

Dear Jane，

I am sorry to hear that you didnt do well in math and have lost interest in schoolwork. As is often the case， math is difficult for most students， so there is no need to feel too bad. At this moment， what you should is to cheer up and find ways to reduce your anxiety. Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music？ If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most， they may give you some practical advice that helps you. Probably its time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.

Anyway， if you have any other difficulties， please tell us in time and I hope you can rebuild your self-confidence soon！

Yours，

Li Fang

責任編輯 蔣小青