My English Learning

范玙瑄

Hello， everyone！ Im Lucy. Im your friend. Let me tell you about my English learning.

Four years ago，I began to learn English. We have learned a lot words and sentences， and I can use them in and out of class. My English teacher is a young teacher， but she is a wise teacher. I like my English teacher very much！ Because she taught us in many ways. In English lessons， I listened to my English teacher carefully. Out of English lesson， we often sang， danced， chanted and played games. Our English teacher usually let us do things by ourselves. We did role play. We acted in drama. Now I can use words and sentences to tell stories.

In English lessons， Im very happy！ From English lessons and English teacher， I know learning English is a very happy thing.

簡評：

該篇習作結構完整，有條理，細節充實，語句通順流暢，語言邏輯清晰。小作者將英語學習的時間、學習方法以及學習成果描述得很清楚。

指導教師：王雪娟