My Friends

李芳菲

In our daily life， We always stay with our friends. Well be happy if we have some friends， but well feel lonely without friends just like a life without the sun. Nobody can live alone in the world， so we must make some friends. I have some friends luckily. We play and study together every day and we pull together to get our study aims. When I am in trouble， my friends will give me a hand and cheer me up ；When I make a mistake， they will give me some help and trust me that I can out of the mistake. We still share not only happiness but also sadness together. I think a true friend plays an important role in our life. I will always love them forever.

簡評：

本篇習作以朋友為主線，闡明了朋友在日常生活中的重要地位。文章首尾呼應，主題清晰，句子之間銜接自然，復合句使用恰當，但有些語言還應該更加精煉。總體來說，這是一篇不錯的英語習作。

指導教師：關春曉