
高考英語作文時有涉及“感謝”的命題,比如,2007年的廣東卷要求先閱讀父親在你出生時寫的信,然后在父親生日之際給他回信,表達對他的感恩之情;2008年的海南寧夏卷要求給美國圣迭哥動物園的工作人員寫一封信,其中第三個要點為感謝工作人員對大熊貓的照顧;2008年的安徽卷要求給美國筆友寫信,信中首先要感謝筆友對環保購物袋的關注;2009年的山東卷要求給美國的同學Tom寫信,信中要感謝在美學習期間他給予自己的幫助,等等。
一般來說,貼近同學們生活的感謝信主要是寫給父母、老師和朋友的(見下表)。
感謝信的行文從結構看,要符合書信格式,開頭有問候,結尾有致詞、署名;從內容看,大致可以分為三部分:
(1) 表達感激之情并說明感謝的原因;
(2) 細述對方給予的幫助和自己得到的益處;
(3) 再次表達謝意及真誠祝福,也可表達希望保持聯絡或報答對方的愿望等。
由于題目中往往會給出文章開頭的問候部分和結尾的致詞、署名部分,所以同學們在寫作時只需按照行文的內容,根據感謝的對象、感謝的事宜,運用恰當的句型體現合適的語氣即可。
一、給父母的感謝信
(1) 感謝的原因
■祝母(父)親節快樂并表感恩:I am writing to you on the Mother’s/ Father’s Day to show my thanks and I would like to say “Happy Mother’s/ Father’s Day”.
■祝生日快樂并表感恩:It’s your birthday, and I want to say “I love you” and thank you so much for everything you have done for me.
(2) 細述父母的養育之恩
■父母的期望:I know that you have great expectations of me.
You hope I grow up to be a strong, brave and successful “lion” and that I can do well for myself and others.
I have always been feeling the beats of your heart since I came into the world.
■父母的操勞:I know how hard you’ve worked during the past years.
I can imagine all the problems you have faced and all the sweat and tears you have shed to make my life better.
I can fully understand what a huge responsibility it is to raise a child.
■父母的培養:You’ve encouraged me and helped me patiently.
You’ve tried your hardest to give me the best things in life.
You’ve made a lot of sacrifices and many difficult choices.
■自己的幸福感受:It is so lucky of me to be the center of the whole family.
在細述父母的養育之恩時,若能恰當地回顧一件具體的事,則更有感染力。比如:
I still remember a game held when I was 12.I lost the game and cried as many kids did. You took me by the hand, looking into my eyes and said, “you are a brave lion, and a lion never cries. You can lose the game but can’t be beaten down.” Since then, I have been doing my best to get over every challenge.
(3) 表達對養育之恩的銘記以及報答父母的愿望
Dear Mom and Dad, thank you very much for your patience, love and understanding. I will value them for ever.
Your hope and your love make me what I am today. Now, I’m grown up! I will be responsible for my life and for my future. You’ll be proud of me!
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