Great Changes

How time flies！ Two years have passed. I have undergone tremendous changes.

First， I have become a good helper. In the past， I was extremely shy. Thanks to my best friend who encouraged me to make friends and helped me with my study，I learned how to help others actively. Second， I have become a good learner. I didn’t develop good learning habits before. Luckily， my teacher gave me some useful advice.With my teacher’s help，I have mastered many learning skills. Third， I have become a wiser man. The more knowledge I obtain，the more ways I can figure out to solve problems.

Looking back at the past two years， I have become a good helper， a good learner and a wiser man. I will move on to be a better man in the future.

河南省鄭州市第四十九中學

指導老師 喬明言

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作者描述了自己初中階段的成長，就自己的三個改變分別展開敘述，有對比，有舉例。詞匯運用準確，靈活運用多個短語、句型，將自己的成長變化用helper、learner和wiser man來總結(jié)，顯示出不俗的思辨能力。