怎樣寫好提建議的信件

陳晨

一、任務呈現

（2022西安一模）假設你是某校英文網站編輯陳輝，昨天收到一封署名為Wonder的求助信，Wonder在信中表示高考即將來臨，壓力很大，感到苦惱。請你根據以下要點，用英文給該同學回信。內容包括：1.表示安慰;2.提出建議;3.表達祝愿。

要求：1.符合建議信的基本格式;2.詞數120左右。

二、任務分析

1.該書面表達任務是寫一封建議信，因此同學們首先應該注意書信的正確格式。

2.建議信的建議應當建立在充分理解對方問題的基礎上，先幫助對方分析問題，再提出解決問題的建議;理由應充分，語氣應誠懇。

3.注意使用建議信的一些常用語句，如表示了解對方問題可用I have learned it that...;表示提出建議可用I suggest that.../ Here are some suggestions for you.../I would like to offer you some tips.表示安慰對方可用You needn't worry./Don't be nervous./Everything will be OK.等等。

三、學生習作

Dear Wonder，

Learning that you are burdened with intense pressure due to the coming National College Entrance exam，I could complete ①relate to you as this is fairly common for senior high school students. Don't worry too much and I will share you some effective tips to cope with stress.

As far as I'm concerned，sharing your feelings with your friends is a wise choice as you can remove your negative emotions when communicating with your peers. What's more，it is strongly recommended which②you take physical exercise for an hour or so after school，which can lift your spirits and thus help get you stay focused in class. Last but not least，keep an optimistic attitude towards life about your future since you will become more strong-willed after going through all the challenges.

With the suggestions above I firmly believe you will cope with the intense pressure well. I would be more than happy to see you have an extraordinary performance in the exam.

Yours，

Chen Hui

四、教師點評

1.錯誤評析

①該詞修飾動詞relate，副詞修飾動詞，故應用副詞形式completely。

②該句中it作形式主語，故應用that引導主語從句，而不是which。

2.亮點展示

①習作者嚴格按照題目要求完成了該書面表達任務。文章第一段安慰對方;第二段為主體部分，就考試焦慮問題提出建議，做到有理有據;尾段強調建議的作用，再次安慰對方。全文語氣誠懇、層次分明，符合建議信的結構特點和語言特點。

②在遣詞造句上，文章能使用一些較復雜的句型，如賓語從句、定語從句、主語從句、分詞結構等;此外，能恰到好處地使用一些連詞，如what's more，last but not least等。這些句型和連詞的使用，顯示了作者駕馭英語語言的能力。

五、英文建議信的寫作指導

1.明確文體特點

建議信旨在就某事向收信人提出自己的建議，以讓對方接受自己的想法、主張，并解決有關問題。……