英語原創文章點滴體會

摘要：英語高考是考查學生英語的實際使用能力，語篇必須貼近社會、貼近學生、貼近生活，時代性強，話題涵蓋人與自然，人與社會，人與自我的和諧。讀而不死，學而不罔需要老師們精心組織，用心創作，授之以漁。教改呼喚教師創新，教師應該創作更多學生喜聞樂見的文章，而創新的源頭就是生活。

關鍵詞：創新；生活；靈感；題型設置；積累

多數高三老師喜歡改編一些學生喜聞樂見的英語文章，但嘗試去創新的卻為數不多。因為每當嘗試創新時，往往有一種“昨夜西風凋碧樹，獨上高樓，望盡天涯路。”的無助感。其實，“眾里尋他千百度，驀然回首，那人卻在燈火闌珊處”。因為創新就在你身邊：生活處處皆英語。下面與大家分享2018年我創作的幾篇英語文章。

例子1：高三年新學期第一次班會課，我以“夢想與努力”為題，給學生們上了一節生動形象的主題班會課。課后反思的時候，我突發奇想：如果把這一節班會課的內容寫成一篇英語文章，不就是一篇原創文章嗎？于是，我開始整理加工，按照高考的要求，精心設置，編寫出下面這篇文章。

You will be great as long as you make up a dream.A dream is to you what a lighthouse is to a boat.Without a dream， you may be a boat sailing in the sea without a certain direction. After setting up your goal， you are supposed， I think， to try your best to achieve it. Take Chinese Volleyball Women Team for example. In order to make their Olympic champion dream come true， they have overcome difficulties on the way one after another and become more and more confident. Because of the dream， they always cheer themselves up and keep on moving forward no matter how many ups and downs. No pain， no gain. Only after all your hard work pays off can you see the lucky Goddess smiling at you. Come on， baby. Where there is a dream， there is a hope.

這篇文章可以一題三用：它既可以設置成“短文改錯”題，也可以改編成“語法知識填空”題，還可以用于“讀后感”的題型中。下面，我們一起來分享這篇文章的改編。

A. 讀后感。根據下面的閱讀材料，以“Dream”為題寫一篇讀后感。

Chinese Women Volleyball Field Force

Zhu Ting propelled China to a 31（1825，2517，2523，2523） victory over Serbia to claim the gold medal of the womens volleyball tournament at Rio 2016 Olympic Games on Saturday. China climbed to the top of the podium for the third time in the history of volleyball at the Olympic Games and first since Athens 2004. They also won the gold medal in Los Angels 1984， a silver medal in Atlanta 1996 and bronze medals in Seoul 1988 and also at home in Beijing 2008. Seeing Hui Ruoqi， the leader of the team， gained the last match point， Lang Ping raised both arms in the air and Zhu Ting sprinted over to embrace her. Many more hugs followed. When asked how they made it， Lang Ping said excitedly， it was the spirit of Chinese women volleyball that cheered them up， the dream to be the top was their lifetime goal. The Chinese exhibited the same fire and fight a year ago while winning the World Cup in Japan， then got to Rio earlier this month and worked through some initial rough， inconsistent Olympic moments.上面的文章來自中國日報英文版，報道了中國女排2016奧運會奪冠的故事。寫讀后感是今后英語高考的一種趨勢，也是檢測學生綜合能力的一種方式。上面的文章剛好可以吻合它的要求。

B. 短文改錯

You will be great as long as you make up a dream. A dream is to you like a lighthouse is to a boat. Without a dream， you may be a boat sail in the sea without a certainly direction. After set up your goal， you are supposed， I think so， to try your best to achieve it. Take Chinese Women Volleyball Team for example. In order to realize their Olympic champion dream， they have overcome difficulty on the way one after another and become more and more confident. Because of the dream， they always cheer oneself up and keep on moving forward no matter how many ups and down.

No pain， no gain. Only after all your hard work pays can you see the lucky Goddess smiling at you. Come on， baby. If there is a dream， there is a hope.

解題指導：短文改錯要做好，常見類型應記牢。名詞多考數與格，冠詞之前錯多少。動詞時態和語態，非謂語結構莫忘了。形副代數都一樣，皆是故意來混淆。介詞多半考搭配，誤用錯漏想周到。句法大多考一致，從句關系詞來考。詞法句法均未錯，行文邏輯去尋找。118來常貫比，回讀細查敲定稿。

分析：

1. like改為what，考查句型：A is to B what C is to D

2. sail改為sailing，考查現在分詞做定語的用法

3. certainly改為certain，形容詞副詞故意混淆，形容詞修飾名詞

4. set改為setting，介詞+動名詞

5. 去掉so，I think是插入語

6. difficulty改為difficulties，名詞復數

7. oneself改為themselves，保持人稱一致

8. down改為downs，ups and downs 形式保持一致

9. 在pay后加off，固定詞組“得到回報”

10. if改為where，固定句型

C. 語法知識填空

You will be great as long as you make up a dream. A dream is to you 1 a lighthouse is to a boat. Without a dream， you may be a boat 2（sail） in the sea without a certain direction.

After 3（set） up your goal， you are supposed， I think， to try your best 4（achieve）it. Take Chinese Women Volleyball Team 5 example. In order to realize their Olympic champion dream， they have overcome 6（difficulty ） on the way one after another and become more and more 7（confidence）. Because of the dream， they always cheer 8（oneself） up and keep on moving forward no matter how many ups and downs.

No pain， no gain. 9 after all your hard work pays off can you see the lucky goddess smiling at you. Come on， baby. 10 there is a dream， there is a hope.

解題指導：

語法填空像棵樹，空格提示分兩股。主干動詞連接詞，樹杈冠介代形副。詞根派生發新株，詞能搞定句不露。萬變不離其宗譜，守住語法享樂土。

Keys：

1. what（考查句型）

2. sailing（考查現在分詞做定語）

3. setting（考查動名詞做賓語）

4. to achieve（考查動詞不定式）

5. for（固定詞組）

6. difficulties（考查名詞單復數）

7. confident（考查詞性轉化）

8. themselves（考查人稱代詞一致）

9. Only（考查倒裝句）

10. Where（固定句型）

例子2：

作為福建仙游人，木蘭溪這幾年的變化有目共睹。十八大以來，黨中央對生態更加重視，綠水青山就是金山銀山的理念深入人心。尤其是十九大后，振興農村成為熱門話題。我常常在木蘭溪旁散步，看著溪水一天天變清，我感觸頗多。2018年仙游木蘭溪被評為福建省最美家鄉河。為此，我創編了以下一道書面表達題，請大家指導。

假設你是李華，請你根據圖中內容和寫作要點給英國的朋友Peter寫一封信，告訴他“你家鄉的小河”這幾年的變化，并邀請他有空來參觀。

要點：1. 五年前家鄉的小河；2. 現在家鄉的小河；3. 發出邀請。

注意：1. 字數120左右；2. 可適當增加細節以使行文流暢；3. 可能需要的單詞：the River Chief System 河長制；4. 部分開頭已給，不計入總詞數。

Dear Peter，

How is everything going？ Today Id like to share a story about the river in my hometown.

As you can see，the river in my hometown was badly polluted five years ago. Rubbish was thrown here and there. As a result， you could not see a single fish， and the water smelt terrible.

Luckily， the villagers have been aware of the idea of lucid waters and lush mountains are invaluable assets since measures， such as the River Chief System， was taken. Blue sky， white clouds， green trees， swimming fishes as well as singing birds consist of an amazing picture！ Whats more， the river has become a fascinating place， where an increasing number of people come for games， sports and so on， benefiting the villagers a lot. Now the villagers are having a happier and healthier life.

Welcome to my hometown！ I promise youll have an unforgettable experience.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

以上是18年創作的文章，它們的靈感全部來自生活，如果我們有心研究的話，也會成為學生喜聞樂見的英語原創文章。當然無論是什么文章，我們都要按照高考考綱的要求，合理設置題型，做到貼近社會，貼近生活，貼近時代，符合學生的認知水平；同時，我們又要考慮到選拔人才所需要的難易度。

雖然，創新很難，但我們必須努力去嘗試，敢于創新，善于創新。時代呼喚創新，教學更要創新。創新其實離我們并不遠。“問渠那得清如許，為有源頭活水來。”

創新的源頭就是生活，創新就在你身邊。

作者簡介：

張慶副，福建省莆田市，福建省仙游私立一中。