高考英語書面表達(dá)旨在考查學(xué)生根據(jù)已給信息提示,結(jié)合所學(xué)的英語知識來完成書面寫作任務(wù),需要學(xué)生有扎實的語言基礎(chǔ),較強(qiáng)的邏輯思維能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。書面表達(dá)不僅要求學(xué)生在寫作時寫出正確的詞匯和句子,還要使整篇文章邏輯通順、語言豐富、緊扣主題。現(xiàn)結(jié)合2017年全國部分省、市的高考英語試題,對不同書面表達(dá)的內(nèi)容加以評析,促使同學(xué)們從中獲取寫好書面表達(dá)的靈感。
一、層次分明、有理有據(jù)
想寫好書面表達(dá),關(guān)鍵首先要學(xué)會認(rèn)真審題,只有明確了寫作目標(biāo),厘清寫作思路,才能建立文章結(jié)構(gòu),寫出有廣度、深度的內(nèi)容。縱觀2017江蘇的書面表達(dá)的參考文便會有這樣的體驗。題目要求考生觀察有關(guān)我國電影票房收入 (box-office income) 的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。而所給出的參考文結(jié)構(gòu)清楚、層次分明,具有很強(qiáng)的邏輯性。
As is indicated in the graph, the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015, but its growth, for one reason or another, slowed down in 2016.
The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors. The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment. Besides, filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer. Moreover, the Internet plays an important part. On the Internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, which is both time-saving and economical.
However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones, and the ticket price is on the increase. Therefore, the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers.
文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理、層次分明。第一段總結(jié)歸納柱狀圖所含信息,提到了持續(xù)增長和增長放緩,內(nèi)容概括全面。第二段提出個人觀點并給出理由;第三段中提出自己的合理看法并給出自己的理由,做到了有理有據(jù)。時態(tài)和人稱運用準(zhǔn)確無誤,表達(dá)純正。范文使用了較高級的詞匯和詞組are on offer, is regarded as, constantly, play an important part, be attributed to, as well, time-saving, economical;還使用了定語從句which is both time-saving and economical;Besides, Moreover, However, Therefore等詞的使用,把文章銜接成了整體,使文章顯得有層次感。
二、分析細(xì)致、闡述到位
在實際寫作中,一些學(xué)生所寫內(nèi)容往往局限于將所提供的語言點作一些簡單敘述,不能就某一事物或話題進(jìn)行深入的挖掘和闡述,不注重文本蘊藏的文化內(nèi)涵。……