高考英語觀點對比型書面表達題導寫

肖世奇

一、文體概述

觀點對比型的文章屬于議論文，其特點是以社會熱議的話題為背景，發表議論，并要求考生對此發表自己的觀點。一般內容要點為提出問題、分析問題原因、發表自己的觀點。寫作中要注意觀點明確，理由充分，多用一般現在時。

二、必備短語

1. ...have a heated discussion about... ……對……進行一場激烈的討論

2. ...has aroused wide public concern ……引起人們的廣泛關注

3. a popular topic一個熱門話題

4. in my opinion /in my view在我看來，我認為；as far as Im concerned對我而言

5. according to sb根據某人的看法

6. from ones point of view/from ones perspective在某人看來

7. ...vary /differ from person to person ……因人而異

8. be in favour of /agree with 同意

9. in contrast/on the contrary與此相反

10. be opposed to /be against /disapprove of反對

三、套用句式

1. sb. believe/ think/ claim that 某人認為

2. People have taken /adopted different attitudes towards... 人們對……有不同的態度。

3. For my part， the former is surely a wise choice. 依我之見，前者是一個明智的選擇。

4. Every coin has two sides， so does .... 凡事都有兩面性，……也是如此。

5. The reason why I agree with the second idea is that... 我同意第二種觀點的理由是......

四、習作修改 下列習作中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

Nowadays， many people like to use Web Language in writing and communication. Some even speak Chinese mixed with some English word， so our class held a discussion about if we should use it.

Some students hold the view which it is ridiculous and hard to understand it. Using web language not only has bad effects on learning English， but also make the Chinese language less standard and pure. Besides， others in favour of using it for the reason that it is simple， convenient and helpful in expressing themselves. Whats more， it makes the language more interested.

On my opinion， its not a good habit to use the Web Language. It may make ourselves misunderstand.

五、課堂練習

網上聊天成了人們關注的話題。請就此話題寫一篇英語短文，投給某英語報，介紹人們的不同觀點，并表達自己的看法。

1. 贊成：廣交朋友，與不同人交流，增長見識。

2. 反對：易沉迷網絡，易被騙。

3. 你的看法。

注意：1. 詞數為100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

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六、課外作業

誠信是一種美德。你的一位同學說“Honesty is the best policy”，引起了同學們的討論，請用英語將討論寫成一篇短文，投給某英文報。內容要點：

1. 有的同學認為有時不能老實，不然吃虧；

2. 有的同學不同意這個觀點，認為是我們的傳統美德；

3. 談談你的看法及說明理由。

注意：1. 詞數為100左右。

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

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參考答案

習作修改

本文討論的是使用網絡語言是否可行。作者闡述了班級正反雙方的意見，同時表達了自己的觀點。

1. word→words“夾雜著英語單詞”，word是可數的，要用復數形式。

2. if→whether 在介詞后接賓語從句，表示“是否”用whether不用if。

3. which→that 同位語從句，當從句的結構和意義完整時，用that引導。

4. 刪去第二個it 同位語從句的主語it指Chinese with English words，它也是不定式to understand的邏輯賓語，故該不定式后不再用賓語了，刪去it。

5. make→makes 句子主語是Using web language，謂語動詞make需要加s。

6. Besides→However 下文是表達相反的觀點，需要用However表示轉折。

7. others和in之間加are 句子缺少謂語，主語為others復數，添加are。

8. interested→interesting 它使得語言更加有趣，不是指人的感受，應該用interesting。

9. On→In 因in my opinion是固定搭配。

10. misunderstand →misunderstood 作者認為用網絡語言不是好習慣，因此它可能帶來的后果是使得自己“被誤解”，用misunderstood。

課堂練習

Chatting on line， a popular topic， has aroused wide public concern recently.

Some agree to chat on line for the reason that it helps them make friends conveniently. Whats more， students can communicate with different people so that they can widen their horizons. Others， however， disagree with it. They think students are easily addicted to the Internet， wasting their precious time and distracting them from their study. Besides， some students get cheated on line.

From my perspective， students should place their study， health and safety before other things. As for friendship， we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us and we should focus more energy on our study.

課外作業

One of my classmates come up with a wisdom， which goes like this：“Honesty is the best policy.”It brings about a heated discussion.

Some students prefer to be dishonest sometimes for they think being honest is a kind of foolishness to some certain. In addition， they will suffer from loss if they are not clever enough. On the contrary， others are in favour of the wisdom. They are convinced that honesty is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. Consequently， everyone should regard it a rule and voluntarily observe it.

As for me， I cant agree more with the wisdom. I have been keeping it as my motto， as I firmly believe that it will bring me fortune and happiness in my life.

責任編輯 蔣小青