How to Make Our City Cleaner and Greener
2016-05-14 06:22:21車春麗
初中生學習·高 2016年8期
車春麗
As we all know， our environment is getting worse. What should we do ？
We are going to make the subway better. Then people dont have to drive to work. We should plant more trees. Then the air will be fresher. The traffic is busy. If possible， were going to ride bikes to school. And were not going to pour dirty water into the rivers. Then the rivers can be clean .Were not going to drop litter everywhere.
Lets start from now on！ Our city will be cleaner and greener.
簡評：
本文是新目標英語八年級上冊第六單元中的一個寫作話題。重點練習be going to 句型。小作者運用了該句型的肯定式和否定式，結合情態動詞的用法把文章主題明確地表達出來，用詞恰當、句意通順，值得借鑒。
指導教師： 王寶祥
