英語短文改錯專題技巧點撥及強化訓練

王永成

一、短文改錯常見錯誤類型

1.謂語動詞的錯誤是歷年考試的重點和熱點

常見動詞錯誤類型有：

① 一般現在時與一般過去時錯用；② and 前后動詞時態不一致;③ 主謂不一致;?④ 缺少動詞,特別是be動詞; ⑤ 第三人稱單數形式錯用; ⑥ 主動語態和被動語態錯用。

（1） They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies.（did 改為do 錯誤類型屬于 ①）

（2）As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. (visiting 改為 visited錯誤類型屬于②)

（3） There will an important game next month.(will后加be錯誤類型屬于④)

（4）One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.( ③ 主謂不一致)

2.名詞的常見錯誤

單復數名詞錯用；注意區分名詞是可數還是不可數；或根據名詞前的修飾語或謂語動詞的單復數來判斷。

① Ill get good marks in all my subject.（subject 改為subjects）

② Their word were a great encouragement to me.（word 改為words）

③ Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.（knowledges改為knowledge）

3. 連詞錯誤

連詞包括關系代詞、副詞，并列連詞and/ or/but等。

（一般考查從句關系 who/ whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether ）

① I have a good friend whos name is Liu Mei. (錯用了who的所有格形式改為whose)

② I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.

(此處應該是并列的關系而非轉折，but改為 and)

③ Clever as she is, but she works very hard.

④ When I was a child, rain was a mystery. In one class, I learned it rained.

4. 冠詞錯誤

誤用a和an（根據單詞的因素來判定）；誤用a 和the（固定搭配，各自單獨使用的地方）多余的冠詞或少冠詞。

① We may be one family and live under a same roof. (a 改為the??the same 是固定搭配)

② As everyone knows, its? ???famous mountain with all kinds of pants.（mountain是可數名詞需用冠詞，所以加 a ）

③ My teacher advised me to keep my dairy.

④ I hope you have pleasant journey.

5. 形容詞和副詞錯誤

（1） 系動詞后用形容詞（be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性動詞 smell /feel）

（2） 詞性的誤用：形容詞修飾名詞? ?修飾 實義動詞，形容詞和副詞，過去分詞用副詞

① Im sure well have a wonderfully time together.

（time是名詞 所以要用形容詞wonderful修飾）

② My pronunciation was terribly.

6. 代詞錯誤

（1）代詞的主格和賓格（I / me; He/him; She/ her; We/ us ;They/ them ）

（2）反身代詞（myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves）

（3）代詞的單數和復數

（4）多余的代詞和少代詞

① Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. (express oneself,??me 改為 myself )

② One day I wrote a little story and showed? ? to my teacher. (加it)

③ If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.

④ Whats more , you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him.

7. 非謂語動詞的常見錯誤

（1）不定式，動名詞作主語，賓語。

（2）and 連接的不定式或動名詞前后一致（尤其距離較遠時），

（3）介詞后用動名詞v-ing形式作賓語。

（4）某些動詞后要求接動名詞或不定式。

① Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was…. (enjoy 后需接動名詞 talk--talking)

② But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(作主語 改為 going )

③ Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.

④ I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees.

8. 介詞錯誤

（1）詞組中的介詞誤用，2）介詞意思理解偏差，3）介詞的多用或少用。

① There are too many people among my family.

（among 改為in ，in my family 為固定搭配）

② I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. （去掉 at ）

二、短文改錯解題思路和檢查原則

（1）句中各部分的結構是否完整，特別是每個句子要有動詞；

（2）謂語動詞的時態、語態；

（3）非謂語動詞的用法；

（4）名詞的單、復數，格的使用是否正確；

（5）定冠詞和不定冠詞是否正確；

（6）代詞的格和性的使用是否有誤；

（7）定語從句中關系代詞、副詞是否準確無誤；

（8）并列句中的并列連詞、主從復合句中的從屬連詞用的是否得當。

三、短文改錯解題四原則

①改動以最少為原則；②虛詞以添加或刪除為原則；③實詞以改變詞形為原則；④以保持句子原意為原則

四、短文改錯解題步驟

（1）通讀全文，掌握大意；（2）整句分析，逐行推敲；3）反復通讀，復查驗證

1.解題注意要點和能力培養

① 核對錯項時，若的確有一時難以改出的地方。可以參考所改動項是否基本符合“1126”等題型比例。正確1個，多一詞1個，缺詞2個，錯詞6個。

② 核對改正的語法項目是否有重復。因為短文改錯往往覆蓋面廣，一般不會出現重復考查某個語法點的現象。原文中每行改動只能改一詞，答案也只能是一詞。

③ 核對答題符號是否規范，位置是否準確，看看有無遺漏符號，忽略字母大寫和拼寫等問題。

④ 如有兩行都難以找到錯誤時，與其亂改一行，不如都打"√”以確保一行正確。

⑤ 從作文入手，提高自身語言運用素質。

⑥ 合作學習，幫批幫改，提高識錯、糾錯能力。

⑦ 精煉短文改錯，抓好寫、比、改三步。

2.例題分析

Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who work? ?? ?? ?? ?? ? 1.________

in the same office so they walked together to and from? ?? ?????2.________

office. Some day as they were walking home together it? ?? ? 3.________

sudden started to rain. Tom quickly opened his umbrella? ??4.________

and said, “My wife surely has foresight (預見) . She said? ?? ?? 5.________

on this morning it would rain and told me to carry my? ?? ?? ?? ?6.________

umbrella with me.” Dick smiled and walked to him, said,? ?? ???7.________

“My wife has even great foresight. She told me not to? ?? ?? ?? ?8.________

carry an umbrella and as she knew you would certainly? ?? ?? ???9.________

have with you.”? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?10.________

（1）首先 通讀全文，掌握大意 此文講述的是鄰居Tom 和Dick 的故事。

（2）整句分析，逐行推敲。

①第二遍閱讀后，容易改出的題有 1.2.4.6.10 ；

②然后先看前6項 第3項 翻譯整句為：有一天當他們一起走路回家時天突然開始下雨了。

Some day 不能表示有一天，屬于固定搭配中修飾詞有誤。

③第5項，由于對foresight的意思和用法不清楚，不能輕易改動，暫放一邊。

④?現在看7－10 項。第7項 翻譯意思：Dick 笑了笑并且走向他（Tom），說到…，翻譯后很容易可以看出said前有一個逗號，and 連接的動詞只有smiled 和 walked。說明此處有錯。

⑤第8題，又出現了foresight。現在來比較第5項和第8項的兩個句子。

a. My wife surely has foresight （預見）我的妻子肯定地作出了預見??（Tom's wife）

b. My wife has even great foresight。??我的妻子作出了更大的預見?（Dick's wife）

比較兩句后 可以判斷這里的foresight不是一個動詞而是一個不可數名詞。可以判定great有錯。并可以反推第5項應該沒有錯誤。（Dick 的妻子說的話明顯有比較的含義并且這樣才能突出文章的幽默感）

⑥?第9項理清句子結構后，可以看出有一詞是多余的。

3.總結錯誤考查點有

①名詞單復數；②時態；③固定搭配；④詞性；⑤多余的介詞和連接詞；⑥非謂語；⑦形容詞的比較級；⑧少了代詞。

題型比例： 1個正確，缺詞1個，多詞2個，錯詞6個。