習(xí)作點(diǎn)評與指導(dǎo)

不少同學(xué)都對英語閱讀感到很頭疼，為此你決定寫一篇關(guān)于“怎樣改進(jìn)英語閱讀”的英語短文，以期對他們有所幫助。提示如下:

1. 不要什么書都讀，要挑選一些重要的或感興趣的書讀;

2. 從簡易的讀物開始，不要一開頭就讀難懂的讀物;

3. 不要讀得太慢，不要一碰到生詞就查詞典;

4. 在迅速讀完一個章節(jié)，對全文有一個大致了解后，再回過頭來慢慢讀，這時可以查一些必須查的詞;

5. 要堅(jiān)持下去，才能成功。

注意:題目自擬，詞數(shù)100~120。

[學(xué)生習(xí)作]

How to Improve Your English Reading

Improve① your English reading， you should， first of all， choose something you feel important or interesting to read. Don’t try to read anything②. You should begin③ those written in simple English. Don’t read those which prove difficult for you at the very beginning.

While reading， don’t read too slowly or look up dictionary for④ every new word you meet with. After reading a passage and having its main idea in your⑤ mind， you may turn back and read it again. This time you read it slowly and look up some new words if nece-ssary.

Keep on reading in this way and you’ll surely make progresses⑥ little by little.

[習(xí)作評析]

本文能按照要求寫出要點(diǎn)，語言流暢，格式規(guī)范。當(dāng)然其中的一些小錯誤也應(yīng)當(dāng)盡量避免:①Improve應(yīng)改為To improve。此處應(yīng)是動詞不定式作目的狀語。②anything應(yīng)改為everything。不定代詞的誤用。此句所表達(dá)的意思是“不要試圖什么書都讀”。③此處加with，表示“以/從……開始”應(yīng)用begin with。④去掉此處的 dictionary for。這里短語look up表示“查閱字典等”意思，后面直接跟查的內(nèi)容。⑤去掉此處的your。表示“記住某事”用短語keep/have…in mind， mind前不需要限定詞。⑥progresses改為progress。progress是抽象名詞，不能用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

[改后作文]

How to Improve Your English Reading

To improve your English reading， you should， first of all， choose something you feel important or interesting to read. Don’t try to read everything. You should begin with those written in simple English. Don’t read those which prove difficult for you at the very beginning.

While reading， don’t read too slowly or look up every new word you meet with. After reading a passage and having its main idea in mind， you may turn back and read it again. This time you read it slowly and look up some new words if necessary.

Keep on reading in this way and you’ll surely make progress little by little.