Weekends

刁靖宇

本期點(diǎn)評名師

姜經(jīng)志 男，中學(xué)英語高級教師、省級骨干教師、淮北市優(yōu)秀教師、中國外語學(xué)習(xí)研究會會員、《學(xué)英語》《英語周報(bào)》《中學(xué)生英語》特約編輯;多年來，在省級以上報(bào)刊發(fā)表文章800余篇，并有多篇論文獲獎(jiǎng);曾主編《初中生英語滿分作文大全》《英語奧林匹克》《新目標(biāo)英語八年級暑假作業(yè)》，參編《高中英語知識點(diǎn)反饋與閱讀》《初中英語題典大全》《21世紀(jì)英語學(xué)習(xí)指南》《初中英語新作文》《中學(xué)生英語水平測試》等10余冊;輔導(dǎo)的學(xué)生有30余人次在國家和省級英語競賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。

Weekends mean that people can have a two-day rest. People can go out to enjoy them① or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other.

Everyone spends weekends in his own way. In these two days， some people like to relax by listen② to music， reading novels or watching films， others perhaps are more active by playing basketball， skating or dancing. Different people have different ways of relaxing.

I used to spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents took me to visit their old friends. Sometimes I went to the library to study or borrow some books to gain knowledges③. I also went to see various exhibitions to broaden my mind. A trip to the seashore or a mountain resort was my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.

1. 優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

小作者用了兩個(gè)段落的內(nèi)容來說明人們?nèi)绾芜^周末，最后一個(gè)段落回顧自己過周末的方式。文章中心突出，論述充分，語言流暢易懂，語意連貫，表達(dá)的意思完整。小作者成功地運(yùn)用了賓語從句、動詞不定式及“used to”結(jié)構(gòu)等，體現(xiàn)了扎實(shí)的語言基本功。

2. 需要修改的地方：

①“them”應(yīng)改為“themselves”。“enjoy”后接反身代詞，即“enjoy oneself”，意為“玩得開心;過得愉快”。

②“l(fā)isten”應(yīng)改為“l(fā)istening”。“by”是介詞，后接動詞時(shí)應(yīng)使用動詞的“-ing”形式。

③“knowledges”應(yīng)改為“knowledge”。“knowledge”為不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)變化。

3. 評分：

按中考英語作文滿分25分的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，本文修改前可得23分。