2021年高考文體寫作系列1：感謝信

河南鄭州十一中 谷戰峰

素養解讀

感謝信是用于感謝他人的饋贈、款待、幫助，以及對慰問信和祝賀信的回復。 信件不宜過長，只需寫明感謝他人的理由即可，內容要感情真摯，措辭得體。 感謝信是高考中常考的交際性應用文體之一。

感謝信一般分為三個部分：

第一段：表達感謝之情并說明原因。

第二段：細述并贊賞對方給予的幫助。

第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達回報愿望。

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（一）常用句式

第一段：表達感謝之情并說明原因

I am writing this letter to thank you for...

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...

With my deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express...

I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for...

I am obliged to you for/I owe you a great deal for...

I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much.Thank you very much for...

第二段：細述并贊賞對方給予的幫助

It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to..

Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit...

It was your kind help that...(強調句型)

If it had not been for your help/guidance/assistance, I wouldn't have won the prize.(虛擬語氣)

But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done...

第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達回報愿望

Thanks again for your generous help.

I appreciate it more than I can say.

My true gratitude is beyond the word's description.

I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.

Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.

Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.

（二）寫作模板

Dear _______,

How about your life/study/work? I'm writing to express my thanks for your _______(感謝的原因).If it had not been for your assistance in________(對方給予你的具體幫助), I fear that I would have been ________(沒有對方幫助時的后果).

During the _______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by ________.First,you _______.What's more,you _______.There is still one thing that I can't forget.That is _______.(原因)

Thanks a lot for your kindness again.(再次致謝)

Give my best regards to _______.(祝愿)Yours sincerely,Li Hua

考題回放

（2020·中原名校聯盟聯考）假定你是李華，在即將結束高中生活之際，請你給任教期滿已回國的外教Peter寫一封感謝信。 要點如下：

1.老師在學習和生活上對你的幫助；

2.表達感激之情及祝愿。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。Dear Peter,

Yours,

Li Hua

寫作指導

審文體——感謝信。

審要點——回顧幫助，表達感激。

審時態——敘述幫助用過去時，表達祝愿用一般將來時。

審交際對象——收信人為外教Peter。

審寫作要求——篇幅為100詞左右， 可適當增加細節。

佳作賞析

Dear Peter,

As my middle-school life is coming to an end， I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for what you have done for me during the past three years.

Without your help, I would not have achieved so much in learning English last year.Moreover, you offered so much encouragement while I was in low spirits.Thanks to your help, I became more confident and spent more time reading English books.The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite subject.Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.

Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

點評：本文是一篇感謝信，文章結構清晰、要點齊全、行文連貫、時態準確、語言得體，體現了作者扎實的語言基本功。 文章使用without引導的含蓄虛擬語氣和短語be in low spirits、pay off，以及各類從句，如what引導的賓語從句（what you have done for me during the past three years）和while引導的時間狀語從句（while I was in low spirits），增加了文章的得分點。

另外， 文章的交際性非常明確，“Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.” 一句尤為情真意切，體現了良好的交際策略。

寫作評估

13 questions for self-checking for my writing Items Yes or no Why How to improve 1.Did I make my position clear at the beginning of my letter?2.Did I put my reasons in a logical order with the strongest argument in the end?3.Who is my reader? Will my arguments be convincing to him or her?4.Did I grab my reader's attention at the beginning of my letter and end with an effective conclusion?5.Did I include enough facts to support my reasons?6.Did I vary my sentences so they fit together well?7.Did I use opinion words to express my views and sway my readers?8.Did I use correct capitalization for proper nouns?9.Did I proofread for correct letter punctuation and form?10.Did I stick to my topic? If not, why not?11.Did I give my readers adequate information?12.Were the ideas in an order that makes sense?13.Did I correct all errors?

再試鋒芒

（2019·浙江卷）假定你是李華，經常幫助你學習英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：

1.表示感謝；

2.回顧Alex對你的幫助；

3.臨別祝愿。

注意:

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。