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一、文體概述
問題解決型作文要求考生對生活中的某個問題簡要描述并提出解決方法。其常見形式是:一、目前存在某個問題;二、這種問題的危害或產生原因;三、給出解決方法。此類作文的重點在于如何解決問題,占文章的1/3至1/2的篇幅。
二、必備短語
1. with the rapid development of ... 隨著……的快速發展
2. it is of great importance for us to... 我們十分必要去做某事
3. take some measures to solve this problem采取措施解決問題
4. more problems are brought to our attention 我們關注到很多問題
5. spare no effort to solve this problem 不遺余力解決這個問題
6. cope with the situation 處理這個局面
7. take ones advice聽取某人的建議
8. it is high time that we did sth 是我們做某事的時候了
9. take sth. into consideration 將某事納入考慮
10. there is still a long way for us to do sth要做到某事,我們還有很長的路走
三、套用句式
1. Recently, environmental pollution has been brought into public attention. 最近環境污染已經成為人們關注的焦點。
2. Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem of cheating. 現在越來越多的人開始關注作弊問題。
3. There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. 有很多原因導致這個現象發生。
4. It is high time that effective measures were taken to cope with this situation. 為了處理好局勢,我們有必要采取有效的措施。
5. Peoples awareness of environmental protection should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken. 我們要提升人們的環保意識以及采取恰當的措施。
四、習作修改 下列習作中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
Nowadays, cars have caused a lot of serious problems in our world, that take us a lot of efforts to solve them. All the time, they are pumping plenty of waste gases into the atmosphere, cause diseases and even deaths. One possible solution is to design and develop clean cars and clean fuels. Because it may take decades for the new models to complete replace the traditional ones. Other solution is to develop modern public transportation systems and limit the use of private car. On whole, the solution to air pollution need the cooperation from the government and the public. This problem can be solved only by the help of science and technology.
五、課堂練習
假設你是某國際學校的學生李華,你發現近來學校考試存在作弊問題,請你給校長Mr. Johnson寫一封信反映情況,要點如下:
1. 目前考試作弊的現象普遍, 對教學造成嚴重危害;
2. 校方應該怎么做。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右;2. 可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 信的開頭和結尾已經為你寫好。
提示:出勤率class attendance
Dear Mr.Johnson,
I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school.
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Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、課外作業
假設你是某國際學校的學生李華,你發現考生的宿舍生活存在問題,請你給校長Mr. Johnson寫一封信反映情況,要點如下:
1. 宿舍中時常會有不和諧現象,對學習生活影響較大;
2. 如何創造和諧宿舍生活。
注意:
1. 詞數100左右; 2. 可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 信的開頭和結尾已經為你寫好。
提示:和諧的 harmonious
Dear Johnson,
I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school.
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Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
參考答案與范文
習作修改
本篇講的是因為汽車數量的增多,導致了許多問題。就此作者提出了兩個解決辦法,并認為科技是解決問題的好辦法。
1. that→which引導非限制性定語從句,替代前面的先行詞problems,用which。
2. 劃去solve后的them因不定式的賓語就是句子的主語時,不定式后不再用賓語。
3. cause→causing 此處為非謂語動詞當結果狀語,用現在分詞。
4. Because→But 上文提到一種解決辦法,下文寫到需要幾十年的時間,形成轉折關系,用but。
5. complete→completely 修飾動詞replace用副詞。
6. other→another 對應上文提到的one solution,這里提出另一個解決辦法,用another。
7. car→cars 限制私家車的使用,car為可數名詞,應用其復數形式。
8.在on和whole中間加the 因on the whole為固定詞組,意為“大體上,就全體而論”。
9. need→needs 因主語solution為單數,謂語動詞需要用第三人稱單數形式。
10. by→with 表示“在……的幫助下”,用with the help of...。
課堂練習
Dear Mr. Johnson ,
I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school. Nowadays cheating in exams is becoming more and more common in our school. This phenomenon will do harm to the teaching and learning quality. As a result, we must put an end to this trend as soon as possible.
As for solutions, many a way can be adopted to cope with the cheating phenomenon. First of all, our school should call on every student to fight against cheating and report it to teachers if they saw someone cheating and they should be protected. In addition, teachers should help students form the right attitude towards exam results. Lastly, strict punishment should be given to those caught cheating. Only by doing these can this problem be solved quickly.
Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
課外作業
Dear Johnson,
I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school. Recently, the harmony in the dormitory of our campus is easily disturbed. We saw fights and quarrels over very tiny little things, which was absolutely unacceptable.
As we know, dormitory life is an essential part of our high school life. So we must take measures immediately to bring back harmony in the dorm.
There are several ways to achieve our aim. Firstly, teachers should help students understand that harmony in our school life has a huge effect on our study. Secondly, students should be educated to respect others living patterns and get rid of improper living habits, if there are any. Thirdly, when disagreements appear, students should turn to teachers for help instead of solving them themselves.
Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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