About My Life

徐琛琪

Im a middle school student. Now Im suffering from stress in our school. I often dream that we can have a different life in the middle school.

I hope the world will be changed because I dont want to study for so long hours every day. Learning should go side by side with relaxation. We should keep a balance of study and rest. The reason is that study without relaxation is awful ， instead， relaxation without study is also harmful.

I hope we will have a lot of exercise which we can enjoy. Doing exercise is good for our health， so we cant just study without exercise.

I wish we neednt wear school uniforms. If we wear different color and style clothes to school， we can show ourselves and own a good heart. I have many beautiful clothes in my closet. But I have no chance to wear them. They can only be stored in it. Do you have the same feelings as mine？

簡評：

該生在此文中運用了賓語從句、表語從句、條件狀語從句、定語從句等，并把簡單句和復合句結合起來，通過自己的夢想來想象自己的學校生活，表達了一名中學生對生活的愿望。本文寫作角度略有不同，是一篇能夠給人們帶來思考的英語作文。

指導教師：楊 萍