關于英語書面表達的復習策略

王美玲

（四川省東汽八一中學 四川 618000）

一、書面表達存在的問題

①卷面問題（書寫不工整，不規范；大小寫很隨意；）；②要點內容（漏要點的；偏寫要點的，自己增加的冗長）；③段落框架（無頭無尾，缺乏主題句，也無總結句；句與句之間無邏輯思維關系）；④遣詞造句（句型亂用，中式英語；時態混亂；）；⑤對各文體也是模糊的，每個主題的基本素材也缺乏的很。

二、書面表達策略

根據孩子們平時的問題和他們的英語基礎，我注重以下策略去引導。

①關于卷面。（目標：Clean/ clear。要求：大小一致；落在線上；避免毛刺。）

②內容。（目標：內容定檔，語言定分；對于題中所給的內容要全面，對于自己發揮的內容要簡單。）

③段落框架。◆一篇英文段落的基本結構：主題段（開頭）；拓展段（要點）；總結段（結尾）。

◆常用的邏輯思維連詞。◆最基本的過渡詞

時間狀語從句when /while. Before /after since/ until /till as soon as地點狀語從句where/ wherever目的狀語從句so that in order that結果狀語從句so....that such .....that條件狀語從句if，unless ,as long as 原因狀語從句because since as for讓步狀語從句although /though even though/if

拓展成兩個層次（主題句）For one thing，For another拓展成三個層次（主題句）Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly（主題句）First and foremost，Additionally；Last but not least拓展成四個層次（主題句）To begin with；Moreover/Besides，What’s more ；Finally

④遣詞造句。積累常見句型；收集主題的寫作素材。

三、結合實例，貫穿寫作技巧

（一）2020.2.2，新型冠突襲。剛開始最要做的就是如何防護新冠，保護家人。根據以下提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文，給出防控新型冠狀病毒的建議。

要點：1.勤用肥皂，潔凈的水洗手；2.盡量不去公共場所；如必須去，請帶口罩；

3.如果發燒或感覺不舒服，趕緊就醫；4.多喝水，多運動。

The virus is spreading around the world. But we can do something to stay away from it. Here are some advice for you. Firstly,we should often wash our hands with soap and clean water. Secondly,try not to go to public places and just stay at home.when we have to go out ,remember to always wear a mask.Thirdly, if we are not feeling well, we’d better go to see the doctor at once. ,Last but not least,to keep in good health, we are supposed to drink more water, exercise more and have a good rest.

Let’s play a role in fighting the virus .we believe the virus will disappear soon as long as we follow the advice.

（二）2020.2.20。親愛的同學們，面對疫情，全民宅家有20多天了，你有什么苦惱和壓力嗎？今天我們來看看一個來自武漢的男孩怎么向Dr.know 求助。(疫情正處于暴漲時期，孩子們壓力太大，各種焦慮擔心蜂擁而至，讓他們傾訴以達到心理疏導。 )

要點：1.疫情傳播加快，我感到緊張；2.不能按時開學，每天在電腦上學習；

3.缺乏運動，只能做些室內鍛煉；4.作息時間也一團糟，熬夜晚睡；睡過頭。

Dear Doctor,

I have too much pressure these days.I have been at home for about 20 days because of the terrible Virus .First of all ,more and more people fell sick,and the number of the patients is increasing every day.so I am too nervous . Another biggest problem is that I can’t go to school on time .Instead ,I just stayed at home and study on computer .However ,I can’t concentrate on it.Also,I am short of exercise ,I only can do some indoor activities to relax. Besides,I have difficulty in keeping Time table very well.I often stay up too late and oversleep the next morning.What should I do? Could you give me some suggestions?

A boy from Wuhan

（三）2020.3.15。借助疫情期間“最美逆行者”們的點點滴滴，引導孩子們要學會感恩。

經過全國人民英勇奮戰，“防疫抗疫”取得了很大的進步，這少不了這些“逆行者”的奉獻。請根據以下要點的提示，給還在戰斗的他們寫一封感謝信。

要點：1.逆行.出征；2.抗“疫”.戰斗；3.誓言.心聲。

Dear the bravest fighters,

How is everything going with you in Wuhan?I am writing the letter to express my thanks to you for fighting the virus at the front line.When I look back those days,I can’t wait to say thanks to you . I remember during the Spring Festival,you rushed to Wuhan with your decision when we enjoyed the festival with our family.You wear the mask and protecting clothing ,I can’t tell the differences between you. I just know some of you are doing the experiments about the virus in the lab while some of you are saving the lives in the hospital. Some of you are carrying the medical material in the street,some of you are taking the temperature in the community at the same time.To my surprise ,It took some of you about ten days to finish building the hospital.Although you are sometimes exhausted ,you continue to work after a short rest .Although you always miss your family a lot,you keep fighting after a short conversation on the phone . You promise you won’t go back until the virus disappears.

Thanks again for what you are doing for us.I hope you come back safely soon.

A student at home

（四）2020.4.10。（“宅”在家里兩個月的孩子們返校后，興奮，懶散；雖然疫情延遲中考，但還得面對，所以通過制定備考中考計劃，激發他們學習斗志。）即將開學，我們將如何奮戰中考呢？

要點：1.按時上課，上課認真聽講，記筆記，積極參與課堂；2.課后作業認真完成；

3.找出自己的難點，向老師求助；4.加強體育鍛煉，保持良好心態。

Make a plan for High School Entrance Examination

High School Entrance Examination is coming in about 80days.But how to prepare for it in the short time ? At first, I am going to get to class on time and listen to my teachers carefully.In order to understand the key points, I am going to take notes carefully .During the class,I am going to take part in the activities actively .Then ,I am going to finish the homework on time .As for the difficulties, I am going to ask teacher for help after class..Besides,I am going to exercise more and keep a good attitude to make my plan effective.

In a word, I believe I can get good grades as long as I follow my plans seriously.

總之，在這特殊時期，根據疫情發展的情況和孩子們不同時期的表現，在幫助孩子們了解實情的同時也幫助他們梳理心理。我原創了一系列英語書面表達，從構思主題 細化要點 分析審題 積累句型 打磨批改，一篇篇有血有肉的文章就出來了，不僅幫他們度過了這段艱難時刻，在德育上起到正面引導，孩子們的英語寫作也顯著提高了。