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學(xué)生習(xí)作：

I have three friends. They is1 Jack, Gina and Kate. Jacks favorite subject is P.E.. He likes it because it is interested2. He has P.E. on Monday. Ginas favorite subject is music. She thinks it is very much3 relaxing. She likes to listen4 music after class. She has music on Wenesday5 and Friday. Kate likes history best. She likes it because it is funny. Kate has history on Thursday.

分析：

本文介紹了我的三個朋友以及他們喜歡上的課和在什么時候上這些課，條理清晰，但有幾點需要注意：

1.此處是復(fù)數(shù)應(yīng)用are。

2.說某物有趣應(yīng)用interesting。

3.此處應(yīng)去掉much。

4.listen為不及物動詞，不及物動詞不能直接加賓語，如果加賓語應(yīng)用介詞，listen后用介詞to。

5.星期三的正確拼寫為Wednesday。

范文:

I have three friends. They are Jack, Gina and Kate. Jacks favorite subject is P.E.. He likes it because it is interesting. He has P.E. on Monday. Ginas favorite subject is music. She thinks it is very relaxing. She likes to listen to music after class. She has music on Wednesday and Friday. Kate likes history best. She likes it because it is funny. Kate has history on Thursday.