寫給Ｈｅｌｐｅｒ的一封信

寫作試題

國內某英文報紙設有一個求助信箱（Letter to Dr. Helper），請根據下列學生現狀調查分析表中列出的信息，以高三學生王勇的名義用英語給Dr. Helper 寫一封信。

注 意

1. 詞數：100左右;

2. 信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入要求的字數。

Dear Dr. Helper，

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure...

Yours sincerely，

Wang Yong

寫作改析

Dear Dr. Helper，

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours to do{1} my homework at home.

Our{2} teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves， but we hardly have no{3} time to do we want{4}. Besides， we even don’t have enough sleep. There seems to have{5} three causes about the overload: the pressure of examinations， too many{6}homework and the high expectations from the parents and teachers. We are often warned that if we don’t do our best， we don’t{7} have the chance to go to the{8} university. I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk{9}. I am looking forward to get{10} your advice.

Yours sincerely，

Wang Yong

評 語

此篇習作是篇中檔作文。基本完成了此作文題要求表達的要點。語言銜接比較自然，部分錯誤不會太影響讀者的理解。從所出現的錯誤來看，建議加強介詞、非謂語動詞以及固定搭配的學習。

{1}doing{2}We{3}any{4}what we want{5}be

{6}much{7}won’t {8}去掉the{9}talk to{10}getting

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