The Sport I Prefer

Ladies and gentlemen， I am honored to be here and give a short speech. It goes without saying that doing sports makes our lives colorful and meaningful. Among all kinds of sports， I like running best for the reason that it can help me forget all my worries and enable me to get a sense of freedom.

One of my wonderful experiences about running was that I met a good partner named Jack while running. We share the same hobby and run together all the time. So enjoyable is it to run freely with a partner that it becomes a cherished part of our weekly routine.

In short， as for me， running is not only a sport， but also a symbol of the spirit of fighting. I’ll stick to running for the rest of my life.

河南省鄭州金桂中學

指導老師 辛會勤

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