My Great World

In my small world， everything is full of magic and beauty. My small world is a beautiful garden with colourful flowers， green grass， and a clear stream. Every morning， birds sing in the branches， and butterflies dance among the flowers.

In this small world， I have a tiny wooden house. There is a small mailbox on the door. The mailbox is always filled with letters and cards from my friends， and each letter brings me joy and surprise.

I like to sit by the stream and watch the little fish swim back and forth. Sometimes， I take out my paintbrushes and paper to draw the beautiful scenery around me.

My small world is filled with love and warmth.

深圳市南山區前海路陽光小學四（1）班 鄧博宇

指導老師 朱平平：

小作者用文字生動描繪了一個充滿愛與魔法的小世界。語言簡潔，結構清晰，情感真摯，充滿想象力和創造力。通過具體的細節描寫，如木屋、小溪等，展現了小作者對美好世界的向往和熱愛。