申孝賢：Birthday Party

Today is my birthday.

I am too excited to sleep for a long time.

So I get up early. I see a big cake on the table.

I call my friends and invite them to my party.

After a while， my friends are all here.

Then， my birthday party starts.

My mother turns off the lights. My father lights the candles. The candles are bright.

All my friends sing the birthday song to me.

江蘇省蘇州高新區白馬澗小學四（16）班 申孝賢

指導老師 趙 庭：

李梓晨是按照時間先后順序，介紹自己生日派對上的一些活動，例如收禮物、吃蛋糕、拍合影等；申孝賢對情緒的描寫非常細膩，例如生日前的激動心情、燭光，以及關燈許愿的細節等。兩位同學都表達出了對家人和朋友的感恩之情。