My Summer Holiday1

Everyone has their own unique summer experiences， and last summer was no different for me. It all started when my sister and I went to Weihai together. We saw wide and sandy beaches and did many activities like swimming and sunbathing（日光?。? The sea there was really beautiful！ We had a lot of fun！

六（4）班 楊東睿

Last year， I had a great summer holiday. I went to Chongqing with my family. The trip was wonderful. We ate many kinds of Chongqing food， such as Chongqing hot pot. It’s spicy（辣的） but very delicious. People in Chongqing were also very hospitable（好客的）. When we left Chongqing， we felt sad to say goodbye. What a wonderful summer holiday！

六（4）班 劉浩

小作者們都運(yùn)用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)講述了自己暑期去旅行的經(jīng)歷，敘述清晰、文字流暢。黃梓俁描述了北京之行最令人激動(dòng)與自豪的事情——在天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng)看升旗；楊霆右運(yùn)用擬人等手法把在花果山看到的景色、事物描述得十分具體、形象；楊東睿寫(xiě)了自己在威海的旅行經(jīng)歷，文字間充滿(mǎn)了對(duì)大海的喜愛(ài)；劉浩回憶了自己在重慶品嘗的各種美食，表達(dá)了依依不舍之情。暑假中令人難忘的經(jīng)歷有很多，同學(xué)們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí)可以抓住最難忘的一個(gè)方面展開(kāi)，同時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)的一致性。