My Spring Festival3

Last year， I had a special Spring Festival， because my parents and I travelled to Hong Kong to celebrate. We spent three days there. On the first day， we went to the Disneyland Resort and the Ocean Park. On the second day， we had a big dinner. On the third day， we went to a big shopping mall and bought a lot of presents for our friends.

六（2）班 南樂怡

During the Spring Festival， I have a lot of time to do the things I love. I’m good at calligraphy（書法）， so I often write some couplets for my relatives to put on the doors. I like cooking， too. During the Spring Festival， I usually cook nice food for my grandparents. How do you spend your Spring Festival？

六（2）班 孫詩棋

The Spring Festival is very important for me. It’s the time when my parents return home from Guangdong， and I can stay with them for one week. We do many things together. We clean our house， go shopping， watch the Spring Festival Gala， have a big dinner， and so on. How I wish every day were like the Spring Festival！ 六（2）班 湯子騰

On Chinese New Year’s Eve， my family always stick couplets and hang red lanterns in the morning. In the evening， we usually eat dumplings and look for the coins hidden within them. Everyone wants to get these coins for good luck. After dinner， my parents and grandparents always give me red packets. What an important day for us！ 六（2）班 王馨

指導(dǎo)老師點(diǎn)評

四位小作者從不同角度描述了自己的春節(jié)。南樂怡用過去時(shí)回憶了春節(jié)去香港旅游的經(jīng)歷。孫詩棋結(jié)合個(gè)人愛好，講述了自己幫親戚寫春聯(lián)、為家人做年夜飯的貼心舉動。因?yàn)楦改赋Ｄ暝谕夤ぷ鳎汗?jié)對于湯子騰來說格外重要，他用“How I wish”的虛擬語氣句型，突出了團(tuán)圓的珍貴。王馨則重點(diǎn)描寫了全家在除夕一整天的豐富活動。