高恩博：My Saturday

I had a great Saturday last week. I got up at eight in the morning. After breakfast， I did my homework. And then I went to my grandmas house to have lunch. In the afternoon， I went to swim with my friends. We had a good time together. In the evening， I watched TV with my parents. I was happy to spend my Saturday with my family and friends. What a great day！

五（2）班 高恩博

指導(dǎo)老師點(diǎn)評：

小作者們都很有想法，從不同角度描述了自己周六的活動(dòng)：史辰睿著重介紹自己周六在博物館的經(jīng)歷，充分體驗(yàn)科學(xué)的樂趣；張語桐選取自己周六的主要活動(dòng)，表達(dá)自己對繪畫的熱愛；王沐祺則按照時(shí)間順序記錄周六的活動(dòng)，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，條理清晰。這三位同學(xué)都用到了often、usually等頻率副詞。高恩博則另辟蹊徑，選用過去時(shí)，從早、中、晚三個(gè)時(shí)間段介紹了自己上周六的日程。