I Like Rabbits

金麟

Animals are our friends.

I love animals and my favourite animal is rabbit.

It is big and round.

It has two long ears and a short tail.

It can jump and run quite fast.

Rabbits like to eat carrots.

I like rabbits very much. What about you？

江蘇省太倉市實驗小學三（1）班 金? 麟

指導老師 金? 怡

學生在描寫葡萄時，不僅用了陳述句，還用了疑問句、感嘆句，讓文章顯得更生動。描寫動物時，能抓住動物的主要特征，從外貌、行為、飲食喜好等多方面介紹，體現(xiàn)了孩子們生活中的觀察力。