旅行計劃寫作

山東 張 靜

?文體概述

旅行計劃是旅行者在出發(fā)之前根據(jù)個人的時間、興趣、目的等情況所制訂的切實可行的計劃。我們可以根據(jù)旅游時間安排介紹具體的旅行路線。制訂計劃時，我們應(yīng)考慮到天氣、交通、旅游設(shè)施等方面的實際狀況，盡可能地合理安排。因為計劃是指將來要做的事情，故這樣的文章在時態(tài)上以一般現(xiàn)在時、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時和一般將來時為主，人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主。因為旅行計劃的主要內(nèi)容是旅游活動，所以我們需要將這一部分作為重點來寫。

Step 1 文章結(jié)構(gòu)

Step 2 經(jīng)典模板

Dear________,

Glad to receive your email!Now let me introduce our travel plan.

In order to know more about______________________(旅游目的),we are planning to visit______________________(旅游目的地).

On the first day,we are going to tour______________________(旅游活動一和有名的景點).On the second day,we are touring______________________(旅游活動二和有名的景點).We will check in______________________(住宿酒店).During the period,we can take______________________(交通方式).

I wish you______________________(表達(dá)愿望).

Yours sincerely/truly,

_________(落款)

Step 3 語言組織

一、開頭語常用表達(dá)

1.I'm planning to travel to Chengdu,a famous city in China.

2.With my winter holiday coming,I have a plan for it.

3.As National Day is coming,my family are planning to...

4.My travel plan is as follows.

5.I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the trip.

二、主體部分常用表達(dá)

1.Known for its various cultural heritage,the city attracts tourists around the world.

2.When we get there,we will first find a hotel to check in.

3.We'll visit the temple on the first day,where we can take some pictures and buy some gifts.

4.We can pay a visit to the national park by bus because it's far away from the center of the city.

5.What is more exciting is that we will make our own DIY products there.

6.You can enjoy delicious local food such asjiaoziand smoked tofu.

三、結(jié)束語常用表達(dá)

1.It is such a wonderful place that I can't wait to visit it with you.

2.Would you like to join me?

3.Looking forward to hearing from you.

4.Do you have any advice?

?情境呈現(xiàn)

假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Mike假期想來中國旅游，向你咨詢相關(guān)旅行計劃，請你用英語給他寫一封信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.時間；

2.活動；

3.你的建議。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearMike,

I'mgladthatyouarecomingtoChinaforyourcomingvacation.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Bestwishes.

Yours,

LiHua

【佳作賞析】

DearMike,

I'mgladthatyouarecomingtoChinaforyourcomingvacation.I have a travel plan for you.

I think the best time to experience Chinese customs is the Spring Festival,which falls on the first day of the first month of the lunar calendar every year,so you can arrange your trip in January.If you want to know how we celebrate the Spring Festival,I advise you to live with a local family in Beijinghutong.And you can't miss Peking Opera,which is an important part of Chinese culture.Apart from Chinese culture,there are many places of interest in Beijing and you will find it worthwhile to visit them,such as the Palace Museum,the Summer Palace and the Great Wall.

In addition,I advise you to invite a friend who can speak Chinese fluently to travel with you.Hope you'll have a good time in Beijing.

Bestwishes.

Yours,

LiHua

?即時訓(xùn)練

假定你是李華，你的外國朋友Tom近期計劃去杭州游玩并邀請你一同前往。請根據(jù)下列要點給他寫一封電子郵件。

1.表示歡迎；

2.接受邀請；

3.行程安排。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearTom,

Yours,

LiHua

?評價導(dǎo)思

√ Is there a clear purpose for the trip?

√ Does each paragraph have a clear main idea?

√ Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans?

√ Does the writer use commas,stops and question marks correctly?

√ Are all the words spelt correctly?

√ Are all the proper nouns capitalized?