游記寫作

四川 蔣建平

?情境呈現

假如你上周末第一次去廈門旅行，請寫一篇英語短文介紹此次旅行的見聞，內容包括：

1.介紹景點；

2.談談你的感受。注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

?寫作指導

Step 1 審題

本次的寫作任務是寫一篇游記。游記是對某一景點進行介紹和描述的文體，即對旅游景點和所見所聞的描寫。同時，大概描述一下旅游的路線和順序，使文章線索清晰，給讀者以景點的大致輪廓。介紹完見聞后，對此次旅行進行簡明扼要的總結。

Step 2 謀篇

Step 3 語庫

一、短語

第一次for the first time

留下深刻的印象leave a deep impression

位于be located/situated at/in/on

各種美味的小吃various delicious snacks

被……包圍be surrounded by

被……吸引be attracted by

成千上萬的游客thousands of tourists

乘船by sea/ship

二、句子

Step 4 短文

【佳作賞析】

I traveled to Xiamen last weekend for the first time,which left a deep impression on me.

Xiamen is located in the southeast of Fujian Province,and Gulangyu Island is one of the most famous places in Xiamen.Thousands of tourists go to Gulangyu Island every day.There is a community called Zengcuoan,where you can taste various delicious snacks.Xia?men University is a beautiful place which you must visit.After visiting it,you can find it is a wonderful thing to go to university.Xiamen is surrounded by the sea.You can go to pick up shells and swim in the sea.

In short,what a fascinating city Xiamen is!

?即時訓練

假定你是李華，你的英國網友Tom 寫郵件來詢問你一次難忘的旅游經歷。請你用英語給他回一封郵件，要點包括：

1.旅游過程；

2.你的感受。注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。

Dear Tom,

I'm glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last sum?mer holiday with you.

I'm looking forward to going there with you next time.

Yours,

Li Hua