怎樣寫好建議信

四川雙流中學(xué) 蔣建平（特級(jí)教師）

寫前導(dǎo)練——話題風(fēng)暴

Ⅰ.英漢互譯

話題單詞

1.口音；腔調(diào)__________________________

2.詞匯__________________________

3.改正__________________________

4.課程__________________________

5.練習(xí)__________________________

6.發(fā)音__________________________

7.復(fù)習(xí)__________________________

8.演講__________________________

9.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(的)__________________________

10.使用；用法__________________________

11.有效的__________________________

12.表達(dá)__________________________

13.流利地__________________________

14.逐漸地__________________________

15.語法__________________________

16.提高_(dá)_________________________

17.知識(shí)；學(xué)問__________________________

18.精通；掌握__________________________

19.記憶__________________________

20.克服；解決__________________________

21.使全神貫注；吸收__________________________

22.交流；溝通__________________________

23.查閱；咨詢__________________________

24.大量的；廣泛的__________________________

25.極重要的__________________________

26.官方的；正式的__________________________

話題短語

27.上英語課__________________________

28.參加英語角__________________________

29.提高英語口語__________________________

30.交朋友__________________________

31.與某人交流__________________________

32.提供機(jī)會(huì)__________________________

33.擴(kuò)大詞匯量__________________________

34.養(yǎng)成閱讀的習(xí)慣__________________________

35.寫日記__________________________

36.盡量多記單詞__________________________

37.練習(xí)口語__________________________

38.注重語法學(xué)習(xí)__________________________

39.學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度__________________________

40.培養(yǎng)興趣__________________________

41.受……歡迎__________________________

42.在……有優(yōu)勢(shì)__________________________

43.重視……__________________________

44.習(xí)慣于……__________________________

45.從……獲益__________________________

46.集中注意力于……__________________________

47.精通……__________________________

48.記住……

49.背誦/記住……__________________________

50.努力__________________________

51.取得進(jìn)步__________________________

52.充分利用……__________________________

53.(無意間)學(xué)會(huì)；撿起；接人；改善__________________________

54.查字典__________________________

55.寫下；記下__________________________

56.做筆記__________________________

57.把……翻譯成__________________________

58.努力學(xué)習(xí)……__________________________

59.文化差異/多元文化__________________________

60.培養(yǎng)跨文化意識(shí)__________________________

61.尊重他人的文化和風(fēng)俗__________________________

62.大聲朗讀英語__________________________

63.參加英語演講比賽__________________________

64.交筆友__________________________

Ⅱ.話題表達(dá)

根據(jù)漢語句子意思完成英語句型表達(dá)。

1.___________is to practice speaking it as often as possible.學(xué)習(xí)一門語言的方法就是要盡量多地練習(xí)說。

2.I'd like to attend English lectures，___________I can get more information on British and American culture.我喜歡聽英語講座，從中我可以學(xué)到更多關(guān)于英美文化的知識(shí)。

3.My hard work___________，and I amquite proud of___________.我的努力沒有白費(fèi)，我為自己所取得的進(jìn)步感到驕傲。

4.___________my English teacher I am eager to attend English classes every day.我的英語老師如此幽默以至于我渴望每天上英語課。

5.We___________because___________means more opportunities in the future.我們理應(yīng)學(xué)好英語，因?yàn)榫ㄓ⒄Z意味著在將來有更多的機(jī)會(huì)。

6.(2017·全國(guó)乙卷書面表達(dá))Besides,I___________to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance,.此外___________，我建議你去書店借一本歷史書并提前學(xué)習(xí)唐朝的歷史，這能幫助你更好地理解要學(xué)的詩。

7.(2015·四川高考書面表達(dá)) ,so if you want to learn it well,you should___________Mandarin every day.學(xué)習(xí)普通話會(huì)花費(fèi)時(shí)間，所以，如果你想要學(xué)好它，你應(yīng)該每天多花時(shí)間練習(xí)說普通話。

8.It's important for the students___________at the beginning of learning English.在開始學(xué)英語的時(shí)候，對(duì)于學(xué)生來說，盡量多記單詞和短語是非常重要的。

9.I suggest that you___________,like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs,___________a lot during your trip.我建議你選擇漢語對(duì)話作為開始，比如打招呼、問路、討價(jià)還價(jià)買紀(jì)念品，這在你旅行中對(duì)你很有幫助。

10.I can___________as well as learn more about the cultures and customs of Englishspeaking countries___________.通過閱讀英語作品我可以增加詞匯量，了解更多說英語國(guó)家的風(fēng)俗文化。

11.I often___________English corners,where I can talk and classmates and foreign teachers.我經(jīng)常參加英語角，在英語角我能與同學(xué)們和外國(guó)老師交談和交流。

12.I___________and it can___________in English and help me to put what I've learnt to use.我堅(jiān)持寫日記，這不僅能提高我用英語表達(dá)自我的能力也有助于我學(xué)以致用。

情景導(dǎo)讀——真題演練

Ⅰ.典例呈現(xiàn)

假定你是國(guó)內(nèi)著名英文雜志Crazy English的美籍編輯Tom，最近收到讀者李華的一封來信。信中李華提到自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程中遇到了困難，這讓她很苦惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提示，用英語給李華寫一封建議信，幫她解決困難，促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)。建議內(nèi)容：

1.不要灰心，保持良好心態(tài)；

2.掌握學(xué)習(xí)方法；

3.培養(yǎng)對(duì)英語的興趣愛好。注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Li Hua,

I've received your letter,saying you have some difficulties in learning English.I'm sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.

My suggestions are as follows.Firstly,you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class.Secondly,the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it.Thirdly,you can speak English with your classmates and teachers,which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.What's more,the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.

I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.Best wishes.

Yours,

Tom

Ⅱ.話題演練

假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom給你寫信咨詢 “如何在班級(jí)創(chuàng)設(shè)濃厚的漢語學(xué)習(xí)氛圍”。請(qǐng)你用英語給他寫一封回信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.宣傳標(biāo)語用英漢雙語；

2.開設(shè)漢語角；

3.邀請(qǐng)漢語外教來學(xué)校上課。注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

How are you doing?I'm glad to hear from you.From your letter,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Ⅲ.素材提煉

1.給某人提出建議share some advice with sb/give sb some advice

2.首先to begin with/first of all

3.創(chuàng)造學(xué)習(xí)漢語的氛圍create an atmosphere to learn Chinese

4.創(chuàng)辦漢語角set up a Chinese corner

5.面對(duì)面face to face

寫中導(dǎo)引——技能點(diǎn)撥

Ⅰ.審題定調(diào)

1.體裁：本文為一封___________；

2.時(shí)態(tài)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以___________為主；

3.人稱：本文人稱以___________為主。

Ⅱ.謀篇布局

該寫作可采用三段式：

第一段：篇首句——點(diǎn)明主題，說明寫信意圖與目的，有時(shí)要簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己。

第二段：篇中句——陳述事實(shí)，介紹詳情，提出具體建議，給出理由。

第三段：篇尾句——總結(jié)全文，提出希望采納建議，并祝福。

Ⅲ.寫作微技能點(diǎn)撥

如何寫建議信

一、建議信寫作攻略：

建議信是作者就有關(guān)問題進(jìn)行分析并針對(duì)這些問題向收信人提出自己的看法和建議的一種寫作文體。建議信有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。建議信要寫明寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌得當(dāng)。因此建議信要寫得目的明確、簡(jiǎn)明扼要，具有合理性和說服力。

二、建議信寫作注意事項(xiàng)：

1.建議信寫作一定要符合英語信件的基本格式。

2.建議信的基本時(shí)態(tài)多用現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

3.掌握建議信的語言特點(diǎn)：態(tài)度要誠(chéng)懇，語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對(duì)方感受。

4.建議內(nèi)容要詳盡具體，不能含糊其辭；可提供的建議通常是多個(gè)，因此要注意各條建議之間的銜接。

5.建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復(fù)。

6.考生須熟悉建議信的常用句型。

Ⅳ.核心要點(diǎn)

1.從你的來信中我得知你們班要培養(yǎng)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)漢語的興趣。

From your letter,I know that your class will_____________________________________.

2.你們班里所有的宣傳標(biāo)語既要用漢語也要用英語寫，這樣能創(chuàng)造出學(xué)習(xí)漢語的氛圍。

All the signs and slogans in your classshould_____________________________________.It can

.

3.在班級(jí)里你們應(yīng)該創(chuàng)辦漢語角，你們可以練習(xí)漢語口語。

You should_____________________________________.There you can_____________________________________.

4.你們應(yīng)該邀請(qǐng)一些精通漢語的中文老師來學(xué)校與學(xué)生面對(duì)面地交流。

You should invite some Chinese teachersto come_____________________________________ to school_____________________________________.

5.我的確希望我的建議對(duì)你有所幫助。盼望著早日收到你的好消息。

I do hope my suggestions can_____________________________________.I'm looking forward to_____________________________________soon.

V.牛刀小試

Dear Tom,

How are you doing?I'm glad to hear from you.From your letter,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Ⅵ.初階作文

Dear Tom，

How are you doing?I'm glad to hear from you.From your letter,I know that your class will develop the students'interest in Chinese learning.Now I share some advice with you.

To begin with,all the signs and slogans in your class should be written both in Chinese and English.It can create an atmosphere to learn Chinese.Secondly,you should set up a Chinese corner in your class.There you can practice your spoken Chinese.Last but not least,you should invite some Chinese teachers who know Chinese well to come to school to communicate with students face to face.

I do hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.I'm looking forward to getting your good news soon.

Yours sincerely,Li Hua

寫后導(dǎo)思——反思提升

Ⅰ.語言升級(jí)

1.All the signs and slogans in your class should be written both in Chinese and English.It can create an atmosphere to learn Chinese.（用非限定性定語從句）

2.You should set up a Chinese corner in your class.There you can practice your spoken Chinese.（用非限定性定語從句）

3.You should invite some Chinese teachers who know Chinese welltocometo schoolto communicate with students face to face.（用have a good command of）

Ⅱ.高階作文

Dear Tom,

How are you doing?I'm glad to hear from you.From your letter,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua