About My Life

昝金玉

As we all know， the most important thing in the life is our attitude towards it， tons of men have tried different ways of treating life. I'm a middle school student， I have my own idea about the life. I face my life with a positive attitude. I usually get up at 5：30 every day， start my study and life of a day. I'm also worried about my grades， but the life should be full of happiness. I should study hard now， save the happiness for the future. I'm going to have a very important exam in May next year， which will be a turning point in my life. My parents always complain that I am so lazy， but I just like to live in my own way. I will do my best for my future. In the face of life， I should keep positive and optimistic attitude . I hope I can get a good grades in the exam to reward my life.

簡評：

該生的作文，語言通順，能用積極的態度來闡述自己對生活的看法并且為之付出努力。在作文中，該生不僅用了一般現在時、將來時，而且還能用賓語從句、非限制性定語從句來表達自己的思想，是一篇不錯的學生作文。

指導教師：楊 萍