Making Friends On Line
2014-04-29 00:44:03趙雨萱
初中生學習·低 2014年10期
趙雨萱
Should students make friends on line？ Some people say yes. Internet helps people make many friends. Chatting on line， students can express more freely， and even get help for their foreign language studies.
Others， however， someone thinks students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time. Its not good for study. Besides. Even some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study， health and safety before other things. As for friendship， we can find it in our classmates and other people around us.
簡評：這是一個大家喜歡的話題，也是同學們爭議的焦點。小作者能夠突破常規，沒有開篇就談自己的觀點。而是在開篇的疑問句后，分析了正反雙方的觀點，作者用some和others就機智地表達出來了，然后再說出自己的觀點。表述層次清晰、邏輯合理。諸如besides， in my opinion等詞的亮點呈現，使文章渾然天成。
（指導教師： 孫全生）
