My Life in the Future

楊宇寧

要求：你的未來生活會是什么樣？你將來想要從事什么職業(yè)？請以My Life in the Future為題，描述一下你未來的工作和生活。

In the future， I think I will be a teacher. I will teach in the countryside. Because the kids there are very poor， I want to help them get better education.

As a teacher， I think I will try my best to teach them well. I will help them to open their eyes and know more about the world. I will also be friendly with them. And I will be their best friend. After class， we will play games together.

In my free time， I will go for a walk around the country. I will enjoy fresh air and the beauty of the countryside. On holidays， I will travel around the world. And I will buy some gifts for my students. This is my dream life in the future. I hope it will come ture.

簡評：文章開篇點題說明自己所從事的職業(yè)是什么。作者想象力豐富，時態(tài)運用準確，整篇文章運用將來時來描述自己未來的工作及生活。句式運用準確，整篇文章除簡單句和并列句外，作者還準確地運用賓語從句來表達自己的想法。

（指導教師：馬艷紅 ）