Our School

侯淑蘋 女，山東省無棣縣小泊頭鎮中學一級教師，從事教育工作18年。在教育教學中取得了優良的成績：所執教過的八年級下冊unit6《How long have you been collecting shells》榮獲縣優質課一等獎；所撰寫的論文《英語寫作能力的培養》榮獲市一等獎；所指導的學生在各類競賽中取得了很好的成績。

Our School

Our school lies in the north of our city. It built① in 1980. It has a long history， and it is very famous in our city.

It has thirty classes. There are over two hundreds② teachers and thousands of students in our school. In front of③ the school stands a high classroom building. Behind it， there is a lab building. We often have science classes in it. Between them is a new library. There are a large number of books. After lunch， a lot of students like reading there. On the right is our playground， and it is our favorite place in our free time.

Our school is big and beautiful. It is also a big garden with green trees and colorful flowers. It’s really a good place for us， we are very happy to study in it. We love our school.

1. 優點：

作者介紹了自己的學校。第一段寫了學校的方位和建校時間等。第二段是習作的主體部分，敘述了學校內部的各種建筑，包括：教學樓，實驗樓，圖書室和操場等。最后又寫出了學校就如大花園，我們愿意在里面學習，抒發了自己熱愛學校的美好情感。這是一篇很棒的學生習作。

2. 需要修改的地方：

①built改為was built。此處應該使用被動語態，表示“被修建”。

②two hundreds改為two hundred。具體數字后面跟hundred的原形，表示“兩百”。

③In front of改為In the front of。In the front of指“在......前面（內部）”。此句的意思是“教學樓位于學校內部的前面”。

3. 評分：

按中考英語作文滿分15分的評分標準，本文修改前可得12分。