“看”短信

現在各類電視節目廣泛使用短信作為參與方式，人們對此評價不一，請你根據下表提供的信息介紹人們的看法，并談談個人的觀點:

要求:1. 文章應包括以上所有內容，對所給要點不要簡單翻譯;2. 要有個人觀點;3. 詞數150左右。

One possible version: (附簡要的點評)

At present， short messages are widely involved/used in various TV programs. People react to them in different ways.

Some hold the view that short messages offer the audience more chances to participate in the live programs. (同位語從句， 句子使用了offer sb sth這一結構，“參與”使用了participate in這一詞組) In this way， the mass media benefit a lot from them. Moreover， they appeal to the need of young people’s pursuit(追求) of new things， so short messages are very popular among young people. (連接詞in this way， moreover等的使用使文章連貫順暢，短語benefit from， appeal to的使用準確到位， 表達清楚)

Critics accuse that if the short messages are out of control (自然地轉到表達第二種看法，不露痕跡)， we cannot ensure the taste/quality of the programs. What’s more， such kind of messages usually cost more than usual ones， which may cause bad feelings among the audience.(非限制性定語從句，句式的多樣化) To make matters worse (時刻不忘連接詞的使用， 保證語意的通暢， 不過不要盯著一個用， 太乏味， 學會多樣化地使用)， some teenagers/adolescents are so addicted to(沉湎于)them that too much time and energy are wasted.

As far as I am concerned(發表自己觀點的常用表達，當然也可以使用In my opinion)， the short message is typical of(是……的典型) information technology， but it is a powerful tool that needs to be used with care. (詞組be addicted to， be typical of等的使用， 準確到位， 使文章增色不少)

編輯/梁宇清