原文:
My Clothes
Come to my home. Look1 my clothes. This is a yellow T-shirt. Its 5 dollars. The sweater is 10 dollars. I very like it2. This3 shoes are black. They are 20 dollars. And this bag is very cheap. Its threeteen4 dollars. These are my clothes. Oh, I forget my hat. It is a red hat5.
分析:
本篇介紹了自己衣柜里的服飾。敘述簡潔、有條理,值得學習,但其中也有幾處需要注意:
1. Look 是不及物動詞,所謂不及物動詞也就是不能直接跟賓語。如果要跟賓語,應在其后加上介詞at。
2. “我非常喜歡它”正確的語序為I like it very much。
3.shoes 為復數,所以不能用this, 表示這雙鞋應說成this pair of shoes。
4. 數字13 的表達需要特殊記憶,thirteen。
5. “它是一個紅色的帽子。”冠詞a用來修飾名詞hat。為了避免重復,在此應用one 代替hat。
改正:
My Clothes
Come to my home. Look at my clothes. This is a yellow T-shirt. Its 5 dollars. The sweater is 10 dollars. I like it very much. This pair of shoes are black. They are 20 dollars. And this bag is very cheap. Its thirteen dollars. These are my clothes. Oh, I forget my hat. It is a red one.