早起身體好

大家都知道早起早睡身體好，今天的作文就來點健康教育吧。來看看這篇范文。請用英語寫一篇論述“早起”(early rising)重要性的短文。

論點：早起有益。

論據(jù)：早起可呼吸到新鮮空氣，做早操，對身體健康有好處；早起對學(xué)習(xí)有好處；早起可從容制定工作計劃，對工作有好處。

結(jié)論：晚起的人都應(yīng)早起。

注 意

1．短文應(yīng)包括論點、論據(jù)和結(jié)論，但不需逐條翻譯。

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，運用轉(zhuǎn)承詞語，使短文連貫。

3．詞數(shù)100~120。

Early Rising

Early rising benefits① us in many ways.

First②，it helps to keep us fit. We all need fresh air. Besides，by taking morning exercises we can improve our health.

Second，it can help us in our studies. In the morning we can learn more quickly.

Third，it can enable us③ to plan our work for the day. We cannot work well without a proper plan. Early rising can also give us enough time to get ready for our work.

So④ we say that those who⑤ always get up late should make great effort to⑥ getting up early.

閱讀指導(dǎo)

總體來說文章還是很優(yōu)秀的。

① benefit這個詞語用得很好。屬于加分詞語。benefit somebody，使某人受益。

② first，second這些詞條讓文章邏輯清晰。

③ enable somebody to do something，加分詞組。

④ 總結(jié)性語句，讓文章收尾有力。

⑤ those who的從句用得非常簡單漂亮。

⑥ make effort to do something，而不是doing something。這是文章唯一遺憾。

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